Hannah

Hey, Captain.classy. Now, I'm no sonnet-expert or anything, but I have learned a thing or two about rhyming and metered poetry in my attempts at it, and I'm going to ...

Hey, Nike! So I have a couple of big points that could make this little essay better. First of all, you need to proof-read. That's one of the first rules ...

I'm here, Kylan! I told you I would be here, and I'm tired of not doing what I say I will do. D: I. First Impressions The overarching thoughts that ...

I like this poem to a point, Jame. It's sweet and it's simple, but I feel like if you wanted to, you could expand on this to inject some more ...

Hello, there. I'm Hannah. ^^ Nice to meet you. I'll try to put this as nicely as I can, but I do believe if that you honestly want to use ...

Hello, Miss-Firefly. I would just like to remind you that at YWS we have a 3:1 review to post ratio which means that you should review three works from other ...

I feel like I can't refuse you! Even when I should be working on my paper for Philosophy, I'd rather help you, because if I'm not writing, at least you ...

Hey, Gahks. Sorry for the wait! His stubble-less jaw, sharpened as if by a lathe, betrays his innocence. Now, I don't know about you, but for me '-less' and 'as ...

:] Hey there, Mazo. I was super excited to read this piece, so let's see what I can do to help you out. ^^ I'm actually pretty excited that it's ...

Hey there, Stripes! I saw that you'd posted this and thought I would stop in and check out your writing. I have to say that I'm pretty impressed. After reading ...

Here I am, Kylan. Going out of order because I'm a creeper.

Hey, Hollycakes! ~ Here as requested. :] After reading this through once, I think that there was a lot of repetition. Even though it's good to stick to one specific ...

Hey, Gahks. :] Sorry that it's taken me a little while to get to this, but I'm here now and hopefully I can offer some good feedback. I don't really ...

Hey, bby. I'm finally here -- light years after you requested, but I'm still here. xD -nom- I. Little Things I could have put the urn on that but it ...

Hello, Dakota! I can see that you've already gotten a lot of good feedback on this piece, so I'm just going to read through it, comment on things that stick ...