Hannah

Hello! Welcome to YWS~ Be sure to look around at works from other members and lend them your suggestions, too. Looking through what could be improved in other works helps ...

Hey, Crescent. I really like the idea of this poem because it's not something I see often, so it was rather refreshing. But it was lacking, and I think it ...

Hi, Yuriko! I have a few quick tips that will help you to organize your poetry! First of all, when you're considering punctuation (unless you're experimenting with it), take out ...

Hey, Lord Anzius. Nice to see you! Let's get right down to it. I am reluctant to give any real advice because these lyrics are about insanity. The music could ...

Hi, Becki! This piece definitely needs extension. It ends abruptly and leaves the reader wondering why we read what we did. Is something else going to happen? Figure out why ...

Hello! Just a quick tip before my review: If you have a longer piece like this, try breaking it up into two parts if you can. A lot of people ...

Hey, Stori. So I don't exactly know what this is supposed to be for, because it's under 'other', but I'm going to try to give you advice as best I ...

This is the piece I really wanted to take a look at. First of all, the title is really weird. Okay, most of this poem is really weird. But that ...

Hey, man! :D How've you been? I saw that you were talking about reviewing works with zero reviews and I saw that your submissions hadn't gotten any reviews since yesterday, ...

D: Okay. So. Well. Was this an assignment or something? It seems very pointed and very message-y. Even if you want it to be message-y, it can be that way ...

Hello, Auteur. I'm Hannah and I'll give you a few tips that I've learned from writing school essays. The first thing you should do is look through the essay and ...

Hello, Kayla! Welcome to YWS! Be sure that you go and review works from other members before posting any more works of your own, okay? If you review other members, ...

Hey, Layla! The idea behind this poem is really sweet, and I can tell that it means a lot to you, or you wouldn't be writing about it. I do ...

Hey, Sureal. So, I'm assuming this is part of something that will have more than one part, and that's good, because it leaves me wanting those other parts. Right now, ...

Hey, Captain.classy. Now, I'm no sonnet-expert or anything, but I have learned a thing or two about rhyming and metered poetry in my attempts at it, and I'm going to ...