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Hey there, RippleGylf! So, this poem was really easy to get into. And I especially connected with it, 'cause I feel like it was describing me when I was younger? ...

Oh hey again, Quentin. I wonder if you still stop by YWS. I hope so! One thing I wonder after reading this is how it would feel if the entire ...

So slippery, hexglass, but I love it. I have tried to come up to it several times and had to take a step back just as many. I don't feel ...

Hi there, SilverFox. So this is the first time I'm venturing to review yer poetry, and I know that's always an awkward event. I don't know a lot about your ...

Uh, yeah, the demon of delicious tacos and hot sauce. Can't be resisted. It's not even worth trying to resist. So here are some of my thoughts: Why are you ...

Oh. My. Gosh. Girl. I have reviewed a lot of poetry, and a lot of the time I have found myself needing to say "I respect the choice to rhyme, ...

Oh, hi again! I just read another poem of yours, and here we are again, haha. The opening of this poem is really strong -- it has color, it sets ...

This emotion is so hard to describe but so easy to recognize. That fight between wanting to express emotion, because gosh darn it, that's what emotions are for, but considering ...

Hi, Frinderman! Thanks for sharing your poem here. I have to say, first of all, I'm always looking for some good ocean imagery. Drowning, ship, sail, waves -- these are ...

Hi, Lightsong! I'll go ahead and follow the organization you requested in your author's note! i. vocabulary So I think there are some places where the vocabulary is lacking and ...

Hi, Pomp, As with any poem, I think there will be people who dig it and get right into it and people who are not quite able to do so. ...

Ishan, hi! First of all, thank you so much for sharing this poem on YWS. I'm sorry it hasn't had more response yet. Now, I am from America and I ...

Apri, Apri, hi! Gosh, there is so much beauty in these stanzas, and I am really enjoying the feeling of being frozen in time to enjoy them. I love stretching ...

Jayce, hi. Sorry that this work has gone so long without a single review. It's strong and unapologetic, and maybe that's why? I love the tone of the imagery you ...

Hello, screamingsloth. Nice to meet you! Oh my goodness, those last two lines are so rich! Drifting among the bees not only gives that sense of movement, but also a ...