HaleyPenguin

I like this poem. It was short an simple. But I think that There could be more to it, you know? There should be more detail. Make the reader feel ...

This was done rather well. I like the title. (It caught my eye right away) It was a great way to really work the brain to try and come up ...

I honestly love this poem. Everything you put into it all flows and fits together perfectly. Kudos. "So I shall lie here and dream as life passes me by, For ...

Hello :) I think this was a beautiful poem done very well. I love the way it fits together. "Catches her lovers eyes, the way he believes As she turns ...

I like this a lot. It flows very well, and I love the title. It caught my attention right away. (p.s. I love your picture.) "The madness dripping from your ...

Hello there! :) It's review time! :D Alright, so I like the poem and the emotion that was used. When I first saw the title, I thought that it was ...

Wow, I think this is really good! I like the whole student-falling-for-the-teacher scene you made. I like how you added the teachers P.O.V. as well. It really made the story ...

Hello :) First thing: The title was a total eye catcher for me. I loved it. I really liked this story. I think it's well written. I thought it was ...

Wow! Talk about amazing! This was very well written. I loved every sentence! There was a lot of emotion used which is a very good quality in a writer. I ...

I am very intrigued. This was done very well. I liked this a lot. I love the way you put it together, and it made sense. It all flowed together, ...

Hello :) Okay, first off, I thought this was really good. I liked it a lot. Just a few quick things... Personally, I think bolding the entire thing turns off ...

Hello :) I thought you did an amazing job on this. I read it twice. (Not to look for corrections, but because I liked it so much.) There are a ...

Hello :) First things first. That title? Talk about AMAZING!!!! That really will catch a readers attention. All in all, I thought this was done very well. Just a few ...

Talk about an eye catching title! Good job on that. This was done rather well in my opinion. I like the way you put it all together. "Pretty bones, my ...

This is very original! I love the style you used and the topic you chose. The imagery was AMAZING! It really seemed like a movie was going on in my ...