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I love the all musicality of it even if it doesn't rhyme all the time , there is something to it. It has a rock side I like and I'd ...

There is a lot of strength in this poem, the storytelling is beautiful , your writing style is very interesting . This poem makes me think of a poem in ...

First of all I love the descriptions and how you conduct the action , your technique is very good there is only one thing that could be corrected. At some ...

I find your poem totally amazing and meaningful , the words are really well chosen , and the theme even if usual in poetry is here used with originality. The ...

I like the way your last phrase sort of stands out from the all text , but I fear that I didn't have enough information before that , I would ...

This is a very good poem , I love the rhythm. It makes sense and the story telling is beautiful. But if I can add something, there is a part ...

I love the way you tell a story through the poem which we can relate to and feel. I personnally think it's the purpose of poetry and writings in general. ...

It really looks like the beginning of something long to me. Maybe a short story or a novel . It's very rich in information and it gets the reader into ...