Haiimthomas

Hello :) I'm here to read your story! The small village that was carefully tucked into a forest began its daily routine of preparing for nightfall -- they were primitive, ...

I stopped to catch my breath, bending over with my hands on my knees while I felt the cold hair stinging my lungs. And yet proceeds - seconds later - ...

Hello! Thomas here :) I really liked the intro, dropped me/the readers right into the action/argument. The dialogue between all of your characters too was great, very believable. I actually ...

Hello! Thomas here :) First off I must say I really enjoyed your story, it was a very interesting and intriguing read, though I think you could improve the dialogue ...

Hello! Thomas here. I don't think i should make any criticisms about the story because I would only be repeating those below me, so i will just tell you what ...

That. Was. Epic. I must say, very well written and extremely intriguing, too. The gaps between each sentence fit really well, gave it a certain anticipation. Very nicely done. I ...

Hello :) Thomas here. Wow, that ending was spooky, nicely done! I agree with what EverWinter said below, especially the description of the ghost, i wanted to know more about ...

Hello! Thomas here! I really like what you have done! I have never tried flash fiction nor was i planning to but you make it look extremely appealing, so i ...

Hello :) Thomas here. I finally found a LoL fanfic on YWS, yay! I found what you have done very relatable and very cool! Really enjoyed the story. I found ...

Hello! Thomas here for a review! There are quite a few reviews now so i feel i would only be repeating everyone else, so i shall just talk about what ...

Hello! Thomas here. This was definitely an enjoyable read. I like the concept of it all. This is the first chapter i have read out of your series so far, ...

Greetings! Thomas here to JUDGE you, i mean, review what you have done! :D I must say, i have never been one for reading poems, but what you have done ...

Greetings! Thomas here. This is certainly an interesting chapter. It is full of good dialogue and plot, yet it is quite hard to follow due to your paragraph/sentence structure and ...