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HJYoung

HJYoung

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: After the crash and fall

    I'm not exactly sure what this is exactly supposed to be, but this is a good exercise in saying many things about characters with a very small piece of work. ...

    Jul 9, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Untitled- 1

    This is an interesting poem. It begins with a call to the reader, as if it is a doomsayer, a sage, calling upon omens of an apocalypse. The emphasis on ...

    Jul 9, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Unnoticed Cracks

    I sense a bit of bitterness in this poem, borne from the heartbreak of someone you once knew changing, becoming unrecognizable--becoming someone that you cannot love anymore. The simple 4 ...

    Jul 9, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Unspoken Melodies

    This is a pretty hefty piece. I’ll keep the review short, if you don’t mind. I really liked the overall idea of the piece, a collection of poems that give ...

    Mar 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: soulmates or other miscellaneous things

    Y’know, the feeling I have when I read this is a sense of nostalgia and maybe a bit of solemn retrospection on the past. The line at the end, ‘you’ll ...

    Nov 17, 2022
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: A Brief Bit of Murder to Start the Day Strong

    My first thought about this story is that it is very interesting. From the title to the actual content within, it was quite unique. I don’t really have much in ...

    Nov 17, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 2.1

    Copy of message.

    Sep 27, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature Re: Bird of Freedom: Chapter 1

    I liked this story a lot. I really don’t have much(or for that matter, have enough time) to say about the SPaG, so I will stick to the plot, narration/description ...

    Sep 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the tragedy of all of us

    Fun fact: crows are smarter than 5th grade math students. So yeah. coupled with the fact that they have superior senses and cooperation, they probably know something... HJYoung, with a ...

    May 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Greatest Risk of All

    HJYoung here with my first review in a very, very long time. Before Reading: Hm, interesting name, and no reviews... After Reading: nice Now to the review I think that ...

    May 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Politics Re: Diary of a leader of surreptitious past(D.O.A.L.O.S.P) Part 1

    Hi, HJYoung with your requested review. Sorry, It’ll be short cause I’m busy. Before Reading: Interesting... After Reading: Hmm...shows promise. Now to the review: I liked the format and I ...

    Mar 26, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Summer Camp Contest

    HYJ here with a review! Before Reading: No reviews! Guess i'll review it then! After Reading: Not bad, not bad! Noice, I don't know much about synesthesia, but this is ...

    Mar 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Dread

    HYJ here with a review! Before reading: Science fiction! My favorite After reading: Wowwww!!! Incredible! I love everything about this piece! Spotless grammar, exceptional prose and spelling, just pit

    Mar 26, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Vincent

    Hello! HJYoung with a review! Before reading: Interesting name! No one has reviewed yet, so ill do so. After reading: Wow. This is amazing. Bravo. On with the details! Your ...

    Mar 23, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Politics, Realistic Re: A flawed leader(Part 1)

    Well, good first try-now for the review. I was hooked by the politics. Most politics-centered work is nonfiction, but if you want to write about politics in fiction, you should ...

    Mar 23, 2021


/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./
— Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)