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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A thimble, a rose, and a ring.

    Absolutely beautiful! A piece of masterful poetic genius! I am welling up with emotion reading this poem, it's so sweet and passionate! :D Quite honestly, I'm jealous I didn't write ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Jelly Beans

    This poem is positively delicious! I really like the idea here, cause it's something not a lot of people have done (at least I haven't read many of them). I ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Hurting Heart

    Hi there! I think this is a lovely poem, very passionate and sweet. I can really feel the genuine emotion in it. I know the feeling expressed here, so I ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Torturous sin

    This is a very thoughtful and well written poem! :D I like the whole tone of regret and remorse, with a little bit of anger mixed in. It's a very ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Divine Inspiration

    This poem is absolutely marvelous. It's a wonderful metaphor of divine inspiration! It's a circle, a cycle, a succession, it's a whole bunch of great stuff going on here. I ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wonders

    I think this was way too short to communicate all the deep semantical messages this poem has! No offense of course, but I think there's a whole lot more that ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Torture Chamber

    Chills when reading this! Spine-tingling chills! I really love the images here, and you did a great job creating an environment. I really was able to visualize everything easily, and ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager

    If this poem were ever printed on a greeting card, it would increase the national amount of paper used by a hundredfold! This is a fantastic and hilarious look at ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Wood's five senses

    Let me say, I think this is a really creative idea here. The whole poem is personifying the woods with five senses like people have. And you've depicted all the ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You're No Different

    I really like the message this poem is communicating. Two people, vastly different, always taking pot shots at each other (at least I hope I got that right!). I'm familiar ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [deleted]

    I looooooooooooooove this poem so much! It's making my heart warm up with joy! :D Now let me pause a moment to shout enthusiastically before I get to details. (HOORAY ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sincerely, Brain

    GENIUS GENIUS GENIUS! I could not praise this poem enough for it's creative and true words! Let me see.... Broken, Shattered, In a swift steady motion. A wretched mess. You ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Compliments

    Love love LOVE the mood of this poem! :D I can totally sympathize with the narrator here; always wanting people to compliment you so that you feel better. I've found ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Black Rabbit I

    Ooooh, chills from reading this! I really really like this beginning! It sets a very somber, yet mysterious tone for the story. I especially like Aria's interaction with the young ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Vengeance (chapter two)

    Alright, reading chapter two made me even more excited for this story. Now for the concrete feedback: For the first time since my home was destroyed, I thought about Dean's ...

    May 1, 2011


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