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Re: A thimble, a rose, and a ring.
Absolutely beautiful! A piece of masterful poetic genius! I am welling up with emotion reading this poem, it's so sweet and passionate! :D Quite honestly, I'm jealous I didn't write ...
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Re: Jelly Beans
This poem is positively delicious! I really like the idea here, cause it's something not a lot of people have done (at least I haven't read many of them). I ...
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Re: A Hurting Heart
Hi there! I think this is a lovely poem, very passionate and sweet. I can really feel the genuine emotion in it. I know the feeling expressed here, so I ...
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Re: Torturous sin
This is a very thoughtful and well written poem! :D I like the whole tone of regret and remorse, with a little bit of anger mixed in. It's a very ...
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Re: Divine Inspiration
This poem is absolutely marvelous. It's a wonderful metaphor of divine inspiration! It's a circle, a cycle, a succession, it's a whole bunch of great stuff going on here. I ...
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Re: Wonders
I think this was way too short to communicate all the deep semantical messages this poem has! No offense of course, but I think there's a whole lot more that ...
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Re: Torture Chamber
Chills when reading this! Spine-tingling chills! I really love the images here, and you did a great job creating an environment. I really was able to visualize everything easily, and ...
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Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
If this poem were ever printed on a greeting card, it would increase the national amount of paper used by a hundredfold! This is a fantastic and hilarious look at ...
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Re: The Wood's five senses
Let me say, I think this is a really creative idea here. The whole poem is personifying the woods with five senses like people have. And you've depicted all the ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: You're No Different
I really like the message this poem is communicating. Two people, vastly different, always taking pot shots at each other (at least I hope I got that right!). I'm familiar ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: [deleted]
I looooooooooooooove this poem so much! It's making my heart warm up with joy! :D Now let me pause a moment to shout enthusiastically before I get to details. (HOORAY ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
GENIUS GENIUS GENIUS! I could not praise this poem enough for it's creative and true words! Let me see.... Broken, Shattered, In a swift steady motion. A wretched mess. You ...
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Re: Compliments
Love love LOVE the mood of this poem! :D I can totally sympathize with the narrator here; always wanting people to compliment you so that you feel better. I've found ...
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Re: Black Rabbit I
Ooooh, chills from reading this! I really really like this beginning! It sets a very somber, yet mysterious tone for the story. I especially like Aria's interaction with the young ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance (chapter two)
Alright, reading chapter two made me even more excited for this story. Now for the concrete feedback: For the first time since my home was destroyed, I thought about Dean's ...
May 1, 2011
