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Wow, I honestly really like this story. Where did you find this idea? I also really like how everything we have today is so old fashioned in the book, because ...

I agree with your last review. The grammar at first did through me off, but behind that was a beautiful poem. I liked the feel of a different era, it ...

Loved this so much. This is probably my favorite poem I've ever read on Young Writers Society. Just don't get too...preachy. These mother nature poems can get a little like ...

I like how you put the feeling of love in a different way, because it really makes it more interesting. This is actually one of my favorite poems written and ...

This is beautiful, and makes a lot of sense. I would just like a little more closure when the poem ends, just so it doesn't lose its perspective. But other ...

I like how you use the vocabulary of the time period to your advantage. It holds its own, which is very important in dramatic poetry. The title is also very ...

Very imaginative. It has a certain flow that I really like. But no matter what, you should always start a new line with a capital letter. Even if you're in ...

I'm a bit confused. What happened to the prince after. who died, and who didn't? I had to read it a few times, but I do sort of understand it. ...

It was a really pretty poem, but I felt like it was kind of all over the place. There's also a lot of repetition, and these would be great opportunities ...

This is very true, even though I'm not home schooled, some of my friends from camp are, and they get a lot of weird looks and questions when they bring ...

Wow, that was powerful. I could almost feel your anger and protectiveness of it. Another thing I loved is that you're only the second person who started each line with ...

Man, I never thought that I was going to read a poem I can really relate to. It really put into poetic words how many teens are feeling, including me. ...

That was actually really nice. I could really feel the emotions that you were trying to show through this poem. Although, it's very important that a new line of poetry ...

Even though you said you didn't really feel this poem, I did feel as if I could relate to this post. It was really beautiful. But you have to remember ...

That is really powerful and beautiful. I actually really get what you're saying, which is more than I can say for other poems. You really caught every point of the ...