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  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Mum

    That was so sweet!. never insulted me about anything. Well thats not true we all know that our parents have been mad or insulted us. I guess. Maybe you should ...

    Dec 10, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    I didn't read your spoilers but I have only read the first one. Its a really good book! Its kinda cliched but I still really like it. Not much description ...

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Pendragon series

    I have seen those books around they look interesting and I think I read a few chapters of the first one. I just didn't have the money to buy 'em. ...

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Wolf Brother, Spirit Walker, Soul Eater.

    Sounds INTERESTING. Would you mind lending them to me some time? Oh yah... I would like if you could return my Nausicaa and Princes Mononoki books please. :D

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: And on that burning night

    Okay. Its nice but there is no rhyming in it and I think you should have a little bit. Don't you think? Your eyes a violent sea, As you realized ...

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Realistic Fiction

    Hello! I like this... But its kinda hmm... Overused I guess cliched. Instead of making a whole bunch of posts for one story just click on the edit button at ...

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 2/6

    Yay there is more! So I recall you saying that the dude was gay right? Cause if he wasn't I would consider the part where he is calling that other ...

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Valentine's Day Sucks

    Nice work but I would advise you to rate this PG 13 or something because it has sexual content. This dude is funny. He has got a strange way of ...

    Dec 6, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hello Mr. Tiger

    Nice work I kinda get it but I think you should turn it into a song it would be good! :D Keep going. Although I don't like drugs this was ...

    Dec 6, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Because I am Your Rose

    I loved it! :D Quote I'll let off all the fireworks I want; I'm a teen, okay? Read the fine font: I'm aloud to joke, rebel, and flaunt. I love ...

    Dec 6, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Life of a Broken Girl [R]

    First Entry Maybe you could tell us a little more about Charlie... In the rape scene you kept on saying it went to fast etc. Maybe you should say other ...

    Dec 6, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dragons Part II

    Again... You need to put more description into it. This is way to short to be a chapter... Try to make them longer! Remember to capitalize your I's and some ...

    Dec 5, 2007
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: November's Resolution

    Ayra said: Snow crunched beneath my sneakers, I think you need to tell us what colour your sneakers and maybe something about the texture of the snow even though you ...

    Dec 4, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pink Jasmine Blossoms

    I really love this poem. Very deep and full. Kylan said: But the proletariat blossom crushed in a hand and being violated - it’s beauty spent and finished I love ...

    Dec 4, 2007
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Rise and Fall by Moonlight

    I have issues with reading songs when I don't know the beat... So I will do my best. Is this rap? Because generally I don't like rap stories... They get ...

    Dec 3, 2007


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