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Re: Dear Mum
That was so sweet!. never insulted me about anything. Well thats not true we all know that our parents have been mad or insulted us. I guess. Maybe you should ...
Dec 10, 2007 -
Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
I didn't read your spoilers but I have only read the first one. Its a really good book! Its kinda cliched but I still really like it. Not much description ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Pendragon series
I have seen those books around they look interesting and I think I read a few chapters of the first one. I just didn't have the money to buy 'em. ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Wolf Brother, Spirit Walker, Soul Eater.
Sounds INTERESTING. Would you mind lending them to me some time? Oh yah... I would like if you could return my Nausicaa and Princes Mononoki books please. :D
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: And on that burning night
Okay. Its nice but there is no rhyming in it and I think you should have a little bit. Don't you think? Your eyes a violent sea, As you realized ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Realistic Fiction
Hello! I like this... But its kinda hmm... Overused I guess cliched. Instead of making a whole bunch of posts for one story just click on the edit button at ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 2/6
Yay there is more! So I recall you saying that the dude was gay right? Cause if he wasn't I would consider the part where he is calling that other ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks
Nice work but I would advise you to rate this PG 13 or something because it has sexual content. This dude is funny. He has got a strange way of ...
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: Hello Mr. Tiger
Nice work I kinda get it but I think you should turn it into a song it would be good! :D Keep going. Although I don't like drugs this was ...
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: Because I am Your Rose
I loved it! :D Quote I'll let off all the fireworks I want; I'm a teen, okay? Read the fine font: I'm aloud to joke, rebel, and flaunt. I love ...
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: The Life of a Broken Girl [R]
First Entry Maybe you could tell us a little more about Charlie... In the rape scene you kept on saying it went to fast etc. Maybe you should say other ...
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: Dragons Part II
Again... You need to put more description into it. This is way to short to be a chapter... Try to make them longer! Remember to capitalize your I's and some ...
Dec 5, 2007 -
Re: November's Resolution
Ayra said: Snow crunched beneath my sneakers, I think you need to tell us what colour your sneakers and maybe something about the texture of the snow even though you ...
Dec 4, 2007 -
Re: Pink Jasmine Blossoms
I really love this poem. Very deep and full. Kylan said: But the proletariat blossom crushed in a hand and being violated - it’s beauty spent and finished I love ...
Dec 4, 2007 -
Re: Rise and Fall by Moonlight
I have issues with reading songs when I don't know the beat... So I will do my best. Is this rap? Because generally I don't like rap stories... They get ...
Dec 3, 2007
