GryphonFledgling

:shock: Ooooh... I really liked this. I mean, really liked this. The one sided conversations were amazing, with the private thoughts alongside. You never hear them talk, but you immediately ...

Erm... I dunno. I don't think it was my brand of humor. I was able to appreciate it, and I sniggered at it, but I wouldn't say that I loved ...

Hello there... This was great, but much too short. I was cut short just as I was getting into it! Add a little more, enough to get the reader hooked ...

*squee* Bill Nye the Science Guy! I love that man... *ahem* Anyway, about your story: This could really use some revised formatting. As is, it is all one big block ...

A couple of technical nitpicks before your story: - This should probably be rated 'R' for use of the f-bomb. The ratings are there for a reason and they are ...

Ah, the plight of the writer and the curse of runny ink. Very nice story here. I liked the way you literally personified a writing project. Or was it a ...

I really like it. The relationship between her and Andrew was just so sweet and her mourning for her brother really felt genuine, rather than the "dead dog in the ...

Er, I agree with sday about the spelling out of the name. But otherwise, I didn't notice anything. About the actual story: I liked the idea, but I have to ...

Hello, hello... Dropping in for a review. Wow. That was seriously the first thing that came to my mind. Wow. This was really amazing. I liked how the girl finally ...

My only complaint about this piece was that it was too short. I really loved the language and the relationship between the two characters. It was just magnificent. The one ...

What do you mean you "aren't a writer"? This was really great! I liked the way you set up the beginning. I was hooked from the first sentence. Only think ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS! Whoa doggie... That is one honkin' big entry. I read the entire thing, but as a word of advice, you're more likely to get ...

Aw, Nikola once more. I liked him a lot in the last chapter in his viewpoint and the like continues into this one. Very nice. My one question would be ...

Geez. Paul is crazy. Okay, there was a lot of violence in this chapter, but, much like the last chapter, I really didn't get a reason for it. It seems ...

It just keeps on coming, don't it? Nitpicks ensue: closer to Bobby 's body how could that be ? All my effort was in vain . I was still press ...