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Re: enter sand man
The visualisation is terrific. I actually heard the last line of the first stanza in Howie's voice. This like the movie you've referenced is like an uncut gem itself. Needs ...
Apr 23, 2020 - Re: Reconcile. Apr 23, 2020
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Re: Defeated in Hades.
You might enjoy this one too, and it would be very helpful if you would review this poem.
May 1, 2013 -
Re: Defeated in Hades.
Thank you very much. :D
May 1, 2013 -
Re: Chasing Rabbits. [0.1]
Thank you! This was very helpful. I'll work on the details and correct the mistakes. :D
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Chasing Rabbits. [0.1]
Thank you for your comment. I posted this in a hurry as I am at work now. Will edit it soon. =)
Apr 24, 2013 -
Re: Dance with Death
:') It is beautiful.
Aug 5, 2012 -
Re: I am
This poem flowed so well. I like it a lot! Keep writing! ^_^
Aug 4, 2012 -
Re: Surmise
Thank you! I do think I you're kind of right about using more metaphors. Hehe! Thank you once again for coming by. :D
May 18, 2012 -
Re: Between the Pages
I absolutely loved it! Just watch out for the capitalization though.
May 17, 2012 -
Re: I Am You; Dedicated to both of them...
Loved it! :D
Mar 1, 2012 -
Re: A hole in your fishing net.
I've made the necessary corrections. :D Thank you once again!
Mar 1, 2012 -
Re: I...
Haha! Thank you! I'm glad you like it. :)
Mar 1, 2012 -
Re: I...
Thank you very much! :D
Mar 1, 2012 -
Re: A hole in your fishing net.
Thank you for the corrections! :D
Mar 1, 2012