Griffinkeeper

The idea behind reviewing is so that you can get feedback from readers. We generally assume that you want it to be publishable. Even if you say you don't intend ...

YWS is subject to US law, since that is where the site is based.

Edited the name.

Naturally we live in an imperfect world. That is no reason to create an imperfect document. If rules are to be created, they should not be created simply to be ...

Didn't realize Snoink was a book. A reminder that poetry fandom is fine, but comments should also have some sort of critiquing done in them.

I'm thinking of rewriting this piece. I like the dialogue well enough, but the action doesn't really do anything but occupy space.

1405 Hours April 9th, 2008 Merlin System The SPEW Commandos sat in the transport. "Has everyone seen the data?" Areida asked. "No, but there was this really terrible story from ...

1400 Hours April 9th, 2008 SPEW Gryphon II Merlin System The SPEW Gryphon arrived at the scene of the battle. Scrap metal cluttered the entire area around the two wrecks. ...

Only third?

Dialogue goes on way too much. See writing link for more information. I think that just about covers it...

*Moved at King Kamor's request.* -Grif.

If only my family life were as simple as this play. *Stars*

This sounds like it should be in the "Other" forum. *Moved*

I deleted the other thread. If you run into trouble, just contact a mod. -Grif.

Hmm... this story needs some work. I'll be doing some updating of it.