GreyMatter

Hey there, Let's jump right into it. I liked how you kept switching the narration between the first and the third person. Considering the short length of your story, you ...

Hi SirenCymbaline, Having spent some time playing Sims, I think I am qualified enough to comment here. I have had the same realization while playing the game. One feels so ...

Hello Abhinav, I'm here to review. Your poem, as per my understanding, describes the fancies of a tired mind, eager to fall asleep. I like the context of the poem. ...

Hello there! I'm here to review. Your story is about a growing fondness between a child and his grandfather. In the first paragraph, the last few sentences could use a ...

Hello TMonaa, Your story has potential but it appears to be primitive. I believe you haven't had the opportunity to edit this yet. Hence I will not be pointing to ...

As it happens, I wrote on the same prompt today morning which makes me a less ideal person to review. But I will, anyway. A very engaging story. The author's ...

Hello. Simple, elegant and to the point, the way I like it. Poetry is the expression of heart. Poetry can do in a few lines what prose fails to achieve ...

Hi @ayushinav. The previous reviews have covered all the grammatical errors and typos. So I will not repeat them here. I only wish that you take out the time to ...

Hi davebaileyme! The title card is quite amazing. Congrats for that. Coming to the chapter, the only character we see is Thorgaut Kabbisson. You have introduced him, telling about his ...

Hi! For some reason, I am seeing your name a lot in my feed of late. I read your post about you being a fanfiction writer. I read some of ...

Hello there! Most of the things have been covered in other reviews. I am going to only tell you what I felt reading your poem. I could see the way ...

Hey there! Let us begin with the review. I must say I felt a little underwhelmed by your poem. Right from the onset, the missing punctuation marks spoiled the effect. ...

This poem, in my opinion, gives a slightly exaggerated account of what has been portrayed. Apart from that, it is a nice poem. It felt repetitive but I suppose that ...