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Re: Affinity 3.3 Girl
Guys, Timmy. Back for part 3. And wwwwwwoooooooowwwwww. Never has anyone on this site have managed to get me hooked to their novel,but here I am again. Okay review time. ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.2 Girl
Heeeyeeeyyyy Timmy! Cliffffhanger, man! That is one way to end the chapter with a bang. Well before I take this review from the end to the start,, let me go ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Monachopsis | Prologue [Second Revision]
Hi,Tulip here to give you a review on your piece. I saw that this has been revisited, just based off the title. This is truly magnificent. The way you start ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow - Prologue
Hi, Tulip here too give you a review. Okay, this is good for the start of a book. The paragraphs are a bit to long in my opinion. I feel ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.1 Girl
Hi Timmy! I have been meaning to review this for a while, but just haven't found the time. Okay, first can I just gush "sunshine and rainbows"? (Okay, not really ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.2 Boy
Hi, Timmy. I just finished reading up to the end of this chapter. It was very interesting too read. I don't believe I saw anything that needed to be nitpicked. ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: Our Goodbye
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review today on your poem [i]Our Goodbye[\i]. Okay, so it will be easier for me, I am just going to review stanza by ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Seven layers of hell.
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review today. My first initial reaction to this is, I really don't know know how to respond to it. I felt so many ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: AdIóS AmigO: A DorA ThE ExploReR FanFictioN.
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on this. This was interesting, to say at the least. The ending wasn't exactly what I was expecting. Okay, you show that ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: The Trees of Death Sleep Unafraid
Hello, tulip here to give youa rerview. This is a wonderful poem, and I fell in love with it within the first stanza. The fact that you make Death something ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: Time Travel
Hello, Tulip here to review your work. I saw time travel as the title and the first ting that came to mind was Doctor Who./ *fangirls and then apologizes*. This ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: A Night in the Rain
Hi tulip here to give you a review. Sorry if words are messed up, I'm typing on a tablet at nearly 2 in the morning. I liked the story. I ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Time Traveling Pants
Hello, GreenTulip here to give you a review on your poem 'Time Traveling Pants'. I haven't reviewed anything here in a while. I loved this poem. I was well written. ...
Jul 14, 2014 -
Re: The Blood Bath and Favorable Odds
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review. O am not participating in this but heuy why not give you a review on your piece. :) I know the first ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: The Fall Of Us
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review. First this was good. The rhyme was good, but that is simply not something that I concentrate on as I don't understand ...
May 16, 2014
