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Re: Scenes in Walmart
HI inkwell! Tulip here to give you a review on your poem "Scenes of Walmart". Now I am an employee of Walmart so this made me very curious on what ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: the road of death
Hi my name is Tulip and I am here to give you a review on your piece. This poem was good, but I felt like you had a lot of ...
Dec 19, 2015 -
Re: The Truth about your Thanksgiving Break
Hi, I'm to give a 'review' of this piece. There is not a lot to actually fix as it is a humor piece. It was a funny piece and I ...
Dec 14, 2015 -
Re: Enmity's Captivity
Hello, I'm Tulip and I am here to give your short story a review! It has been sitting within the depths of the Green Room and I thought I'd save ...
Nov 26, 2015 -
Re: My Brother's Bully's Brother Is Hot
Hello, my name is Tulip and I am here to give your fanfiction a review on this wonder Thanksgiving day! I happen to run across this in the Green Room, ...
Nov 26, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1, Part 1 Goodbye, Sarah
Hello, Tulip here to give you on a review on your chapter here. Okay, so this is definitely a way to drive some punch to the start of a story. ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: Ascent Chapter 1
Hi, Tulip here to give a review, which is pretty self explanatory I guess. I liked how you progressed this chapter. From having it from where it was opening with ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: my gibberish take on hypocrisy.
Hi there Doc! I'm here to review your poem. I really don't have anything to say bad about this, besides the fact that none of your lines have capitalization. Which ...
Nov 3, 2015 -
Re: flora
Hi, Tinny. My name's Tulip and I am here to give you a review on your short poem. Okay, so my reviews are barely ever structured the same so please ...
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: deleted
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review today. Okay, so this chapter seemed very confused. Your ideas seem to be scattered. Not that it's a bad thing, but I ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: Fuzz
Hi Stranger! I'm here to give your poem Fuzz a review this fine Saturday mornings, though I thought it was Sunday for some reason. Okay, I loved how you put ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Your Disease
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your piece. This is a very emotion pulling poem/lyrics. I felt the emotions pouring from the words from the very start. ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Adam 1 (working title)
Hi, my name is Tulip and I am here to give you a review on your chapter. I would advise you to maybe chance the tense to past, it keeps ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Forbidden Love
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem. Now this is a pretty good poem. It is easy to read (though in some parts a bit of ...
Sep 11, 2015 -
Re: Breaking News: Super Hose “Extinguishes” Pesky Sun
Oh my god. I am so glad that I clicked on this. I nearly choked on the food I was eating to while reading this. This is an article that ...
Sep 7, 2015