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Re: The Running Commandments
Hi, Timmy. Tulip here to give you a review after you have given me so many reviews that I will never be able to pay back. So this was interesting. ...
May 16, 2014 -
Re: The Warning of the Sorting Hat
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem. The first thing that I must say that I am very distracted by my background (Doctor Who gif) so ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: The Seventh Kit (a Narnia fanfic) - Chapter 1, The Riverbus
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your first chapter. I must say that I love the Narnia series and everything about it (I even read the books!). ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: Why?!
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on this Monday morning, in which I am feeling terrible. So sorry the first thing that I talk about is what I ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: Prologue (Part II)
Hi, Tulip here again to review Part 2. The characterization remains strong going into this part. It's strong and clear to see who is who, and what their personalities is ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Prologue (Part I)
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your piece here...on this beautiful sunny, warm Sunday. This is a very interesting start of something that you plan on reading. ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: A Solitary Epistle For "Him"
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on this piece. So...if this work was posted with an emotion punch to be delivered to everyone who reads has done it's ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: The Midwest in Summer
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem here. "The Midwest in summer" really hits home with me, forI grew up in the Midwest. It is my ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Diesel
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem here. First of all....what is this format....I am a writer of poetry, but I only do free verse...with well ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Lifes relaxing sounds.
Hello, Tulip here to give you this review on this wait, it's Thursday. My bad, my days are always off when I don't have school. I know, sad isn't it. ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Daughter of a Veteran.
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on this poem, that I happened to come across by chance. First off, I am close to actually crying right now, and ...
Apr 15, 2014 -
Re: Can You See?
Hi, Tulip here to five you a review on your poem on the VERY VERY early Sunday morning of mine. If this review turns out to be non-coherent, it's because ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: A Guide To Males - Lesson 1: The Basics
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review. So this is interesting. Many females that i know about would love for it to be "OH I need a men so ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: On Thin Ice
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your chapter. This is a wonderful chapter and I am hooked. The length was long but it was just enough to ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: She Will Be Judged Chapter 1
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on this Wednesday morning. Nitpicks The paragraphs are way to long. You have managed to lose me when I read it. I ...
Apr 9, 2014