GreenLight24

Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it.

Hi there. Thanks a million for this review and your constructive criticism about the first line. It does read kind of funny now that I think about it. I love ...

Hi there. Thanks for this review! You've brought some very good points to my attention. Thanks for that. I think what I was going for was a completely abstract scope ...

Thanks for the review. This was really helpful. I'm considering going back and messing with the sentence length a little bit.

Ha! I can't believe I missed this one. Great job.

I love this. Lmao. Hats off to you, old sports. :)

I'm not religious, but this was still pretty cool. Great poem! :D

Woah. The cultural concepts of this and the running metaphor of necklaces for a culture or just simply what makes you you are really profound. I love it. Nice one! ...

Hahaha. Nice one!

Hahahaha historical fiction! :D

Hi there. Thanks for this review! I see what you man with repetitiveness and yes that's a word lol. This is only my first draft so I was already considering ...

Pretty simple, but very profound and quite true. I am none of these things you mentioned, so I'm feeling a little better about myself after reading this lol.

This is haunting and beautiful. Really cool poem. :)

Aw! This is beautiful and inspiring. :) Great poem!

I love all of your poems, but this one might just be my favorite. :D I'm trying to choose between this one, Paper Girl, and Dawn and Dusk of the ...