GreenLight24

Hello! Thanks so much for your review. I appreciate your input about the chapters' length. The first two are really intended to be parts 1 and 2 of a prologue ...

Hi! Thanks! I really just wanted to test the waters here before I extended these things--glad you liked it!

Thanks! I appreciate your review! :D

LOL. Thanks...I'm black so, yeah. sarcasm

hahaha. no worries. everyone is entitled to their own opinion. if it seems ridiculous to you, thats because its sarcasm.

Wow thanks! That's so nice of you :D

hi thanks. :D i don't think all religion is homophobic, but i do think religion is the most common excuse for outright homophobia and discrimination.

Thanks a million for this review. :) Amy's dialogue was something I wanted to get some input on so I appreciate that; what I'm essentially going for is that she ...

Hey! Thanks, I'm glad u liked this chapter. I appreciate your punctuation and dialogue advice. :) I will def let you know when I post another one.

Hiya. Yes this review was definitely helpful. The actions will ramp up soon; and confusion was exactly the response I was looking for with those last few paragraphs XD. Guess ...

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Thanks! I appreciate the compliments. :)

Hi. Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked this chapter. I will definitely keep it going. And yep, almonds will be a symbol! :D Keep reading to find out what ...

Hiya! Thanks so much for this review. You made some awesome points there. I'll definitely go back and work out the kinks in the beginning. And you're right, the disparity ...

Thanks! I had been waiting to get some more constructive criticism on this. I appreciate it! :D