GreekDork143

This was awesome. The way you used the words to describe your story was really good. Right from the beginning I was pulled in and just wanted to read more. ...

I loved this so much. While I may not know a lot about this kind of stuff, I still felt the deep pain and emotion you put into this poem. ...

I absolutely loved this poem. I've read many poems before especially by famous authors but I have never heard one like this one. I loved everything about it from the ...

I think you could have used more detail in your story, especially towards the ending. I also noticed that you were changing tenses at different times. Like TheUnknownWriter said, I ...

I honestly can't say anything bad about this story. I absolutely loved everything about it. There were some grammar mistakes but nothing you can't fix easily. I also noticed that ...

This is the first time I read one of your works. This was a really good story and I liked how you put it together. I don't think there are ...

I first want to say that this version definitely improved from the last version you wrote. There were more details than the last, but you still didn't exactly provide important ...