Gravity

I love this! I thought this poem flowed well both ways when I read it :D

Thanks for your review. I see where you're coming from with thinking it would best be a short story. I think this poem might seem odd to you because it's ...

haha thanks :D

Thanks.

Now I feel bad for reading fiction. Great poem :D

I love the song "smile" by Avril Lavigne. Loving your username :D

Thanks so much! And it's about a car accident victim who dies, basically. Hence the reference to death's kiss at the end

Awww thanks!

Thanks :)

Can I smack you now? This is amazing, not a sad attempt at all. LOVED IT!

Thanks Molly :D

This is so completely perfect.

Thank you so much. I very much appreciate this! It means a lot :D

I think that's kinda the point if you ask me. This piece is emotional because it isn't. It just conveys facts, empty and bitter facts which IS the emotion. Not ...

lol I just tagged you in this.