Gravity

Heya! Gravity here for just a quick review. I really enjoyed this. I read another poem that was positive as well as this one. To me I see very many ...

Heya! Gravity here for just a quick review. I really like the concept of this poem, I thought it was very positively oriented which is very refreshing compared to some ...

Heya, Gravity here for a review! So I have not read the rest of this novel but it's very interesting to me and I wanted to get it out of ...

Hiya there! Gravity here to give you a review on your poem. I want to give you a warning. I review poems an stories pretty harshly depending on what I ...

Hey, Gravity here to review for the June review day. So the first thing I immediately noticed was the huge paragraph at the beginning. Usually I don't like to review ...

I think this poem was really well written and I agree with it completely. Although I've seen tons of gay rights poems and stuff the topic is getting a bit ...

Heya! Gravity here for a quick review! So I read through this poem and I honestly think you only hurt yourself by trying to make it rhyme. I understand why ...

Heya! Gravity here for a review. So I thought this was more of a script. I think the best way to do this as a poem is to change the ...

Heyyyy Blackwoooood, Sorry. I know how much you hate that. XD Anyway, Gravity here to give you a review. I haven't read the rest of your chapters but I saw ...

Heya! Gravity here for a review! It was late May and the sun was still shining bright, even though it was late. This sentence reads a bit awkwardly. try saying ...

Heya! Gravity here to do a quick review. So... At first I wasn't quite sure what time period you were in because you didn't really mention the setting all that ...

Hey Meg! So I have not read The Veil, I just saw that your novel chapter has been in the greenroom for a couple days and I didn't want to ...

Heya! Gravity here to do a short review (mainly because this piece was so awesome, there's not much to correct) Okay so your spelling and grammar were great. I loved ...

Heya, Gravity here for a short review! Okay. So I really enjoyed this, especially liking your narrator as well as the funny part about puberty that you mixed in there. ...

Heya! Gravity here to give you a review This is just going to be a short review because you seemed to do really well with the short story and it's ...