Gravity

I can't say I liked this. I didn't like the repetition of "NO!" Because it was just annoying and made the story choppy to read. You also have tons of ...

I liked this. I was also slightly disappointed by the length, but it was a nice laugh. I do have several thoughts on this however which I will list below. ...

Ermahgerd. You did not just... Omg you did. YOU JUST WROTE THE MOST PERFECT HORROR SHORT STORY EVER! Seriously, My horror bestie, @Kevikur better read this. If not, I'll PM ...

This was interesting, very intriguing. I liked the situation, I loved the description of this man. He was going to propose to his girlfriend... And it looks like she said ...

I thought this was beautiful. At first, I did know that there was a person speaking to a gravestone. I was thinking that perhaps it was a parent who lost ...

I loved your POV on the doll, I just wish you would make it more clear what happens to Rose and how this doll came to be in the arms ...

I like this poem. I think it's a very good poem, with lots of potential. However, I do have a few nitpicks. Do with them as you wish, this is ...

Honestly, I laugh at people who take this personally, as if you're trying to shove our belief down their throats. To us, it is a knowledge. That's what you're emphasizing. ...

You had tons of grammar mistakes, and I'm disappointed at your POV. I'm sorry you feel this way about abortions. I don't agree with abortions to be used as a ...

Bonjour! This isn't exactly my kind of poem, but in a weird way I liked it. I just don't understand how it's a narrative. Your rhyming was good, but in ...

I saw the title of this story and I thought it was really interesting. I was pleasantly surprised to figure out that Hallie and Jason were not romantically involved. I ...

You did an amazing job in writing this. It's disturbing to see how a kid takes pleasure in hurting people. So if Trevor has accepted that he is insane, does ...

Kev, I swear I have no idea whatsoever how you come up with these ideas and wonderful schemes of stories to write. I have only a few nitpicks. The first ...

This was wonderful. The only bad thing I really have to say is that in the beginning of this piece, you have to many paragraphs. I suggest connect some of ...

You never cease to amaze me. This piece is so brilliantly worded and it makes me think twice about the way that I live. Perhaps I need to put some ...