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  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Realistic Re: The Underchair Letters

    Haha! Hello, here goes the review! I absolutely love this! I love how you made this so real and yet interesting, but also very funny. The ending was my favorite. ...

    May 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days We Forget to Love- *Chapter Two*

    I personally like this! In fact, I love it! I love how you made it so interesting and REAL. I normally do not read romance novels, but this one is ...

    May 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Culture Re: What's Not To Love?

    Hi, I am here to review this wonderful work of art that you wrote! First, I don't think those lines are necessary, or is that only a glitch? Second, "Is ...

    May 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chasing Somewhere 1

    Hi, I am here to review this fabulous work of art! First off, I don't know what a fey is, so I got a little bit lost at some points, ...

    May 13, 2013
  • Other » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Old Irish: Prologue

    Hiiii! So, I really like the concept of this story, but there were some errors and mistakes. You misspelled some of your words, I strongly recommend that you edit this ...

    May 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Lords of Coolville, a Memoir.

    GrapeNerd here to review your amazing story! This is amazing. I know how cruel fifth graders can be, therefore, I know how she feels. This was an interesting story though. ...

    May 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Who's Love? (Revised)

    GrapeNerd here to review your fabulous work of art. First off, this is really beautiful. I love how you wrote the beginning and the end. Frankly though, this seems more ...

    May 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Holy Matrimony a Dreadful Thing

    Hi there! I'm going to review your fantastic work of art, so yeah. First things first, I really liked the concept of this poem. The only problem was is that ...

    May 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Eden's Apple - Prologue

    This was the longest prologue I have ever read, but that doesn't mean it's bad. Also, I really liked this, though I don't really get the whole prince in shining ...

    May 7, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Trio Maniac

    Wow, this story is great! I love how you combined family love and friendship into one amazing story! Your title kind of threw me off though, but it's great nonetheless! ...

    May 7, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, Literature Re: Hope

    Hullo, GrapeNerd here to review your fantastic work of art! Though this short story (is this is short story?) was amazing, some of your paragraphs seemed kind of odd to ...

    May 7, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: I Don't Fit In

    This is wonderful! I really like this story. I love how you captured the feeling of being pressured into doing something! I have never tried bong, but I have been ...

    May 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Weeds

    This is so beautiful! The wording brought tears to my eyes and I especially love the emotions your story makes. "My earliest memories tend to be sunny, tend to be ...

    May 3, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Going Beethoven

    Hi! GrapeNerd is here to try and review this wonderful piece of art. First off, I love your title! As most writers know, the title is one of the most ...

    May 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Game

    This is wonderful! Though, I do agree with Chiridawn. I think you should add a bit more punctuation so that the reader can feel more emotion. For example, "In the ...

    May 2, 2013


If you can't describe what you are doing as a process, you don't know what you're doing.
— W. Edwards Deming