Granger2291

This is a solid start to a novel, I find myself interested in the character, and I love the feel of it. You nailed the sense of wonder one would ...

I must say that this was very sad. I could picture Azula losing the grip of whatever sanity she had left (which wasn't much, thinking back on how she was ...

This has such an interesting style, almost like stream of consciousness, that I felt like I had to keep reading. I liked the little aside glances at your thought process ...

Not too bad. As someone who was awkward in school (and, honestly, still pretty awkward now.) I could say you've pegged the attitude pretty well. But, there's also a feeling ...

Well you definitely got e interested in this character. Plus, she is pretty relatable, especially in this "Nerd culture" we have in this decade. I really liked how you described ...

Nice, very well executed. I really enjoyed the repetition in this, and how the last line sort of broke it. The rhythm can be seen throughout the whole poem and ...

Very nice, I could really feel the emotion in this, and I can definitely relate. I like the flow of the poem, it's almost lyrical, but there are a few ...

I knew starting off that this poem was going to be weird. But it wasn't weird in a bad way, I loved it. So my review will be in poem ...

I really enjoyed reading this, even with all of its (intentional?) grammar flubs. Now onto my review: I liked the formatting the most, it's really beneficial to the poem and ...

I like this, I think it perfectly captures the feeling people get when they have an experience with cyber-bullying. People act like it's no big deal and laugh it off ...

I'm forced to agree with another reviewer and say that this reeks of teenage "angst". This has potential to be great and original, but that potential has been strangled by ...

Great poem, especially the second-to-last stanza. I read it over and over again, loving the imagery, the structure, and the rhythm each time more than the last. As for the ...

I love poems that are short, but sweet, and poems like this are the reason. This manages to be descriptive, emotional, and beautiful all in one stanza. I can really ...

This is good, but it would be much better if it was separated into stanzas. It would be much easier to read, and not just feel like a wall of ...

This is awesome, I love the structure, the concept, everything. Hands down, the best part of this has to be the paragraphs, especially the first. As said before, this is ...