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HI there. I'm not quite sure what I think of this poem. On one hand I dislike it and on the other I do. My problem with it is the ...

Hi there I agree with the last review, there are quite a few clichés here. Especially "patience is a virtue" just think of it this way: any phrase you have ...

HI there Good job. I really like this poem. I like how your use of language and how it breaks out of the usual love poem format. My only problem ...

There are some really lovely poetic lines here. They show a lot of skill. I think my favourite is "I don't train those who are cruel No, I am not ...

Hey there I like this. Your flow and rhythm is very well done. It has a strong beat all the way through. The only thing I have a problem with ...

Hi there This is very good. However it feels very dense and too complex. I think you would benefit from simplifying it and spacing it out a bit. Besides that, ...

Hi there. I think this needs a little bit of work. Firstly, I felt the metaphor got old very quickly. I don't think you needed it all the way through ...

Well done. I think most of the little nit picks (very small things) were cleared up in the first review so I'm just going to tell you what I liked ...

Hi there. The flow and structure of this is close to flawless. I love how short the sentences are yet how perfectly it flows together. I also like the themes ...

Hi there. I like this. I think this is only the second time I've done a review for fan fiction. I've always had difficulty thinking of them as actual literacy ...

Hi there. I really like he format here. The use of italics and print is just that bit odd and different to set this apart. There are also some really ...

there This is really lovely. I have to admit I find it a bit odd. I like that you didn't just say "This is a simple, weird poem for fun" ...

Hi there. The first thing I would like to point out is the length of the poem. It is very long. I think you didn't need the last two paragraphs ...

Hi there. I really enjoyed this piece. Firstly, I love that that you used an interesting structure for this poem. The I don't think I’ve seen it before and it ...

Hi there This is really good. I actually have a different view of your characters, yes they are unlikable in places, the swearing can be annoying, but I think there ...