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Hey there. I love this. I’m a big fan of comic poetry and light-hearted stuff, so this ticked all the boxes for me. The concept is brilliant and it flows ...

Hey there. This is very good and well written. I belive firmly in all the things this is saying, which hepls me in enjoying this peice. The one piece of ...

Hi there. I really liked this. Your flow was very giid, as was your use of language. It was more odd and interesting than many other love poems you see ...

Hi there. The rhythm in this is very good and solid, as is the flow. It all works quite nicly and fits together. I think your switched between first and ...

Hi there I really like this. I've always thought writing monologues would be hard to write, in terms of sustaining a single voice throughout the piece and keeping it interesting ...

Hi there I think this as potential but needs some work. Firstly I really think you should lose the rhyme here, it doesn’t work here at all. It just makes ...

Hi there I like this. This is quite angry and aggressive lyrics. It's pretty graphic in parts and I'm glad that you did not shy away from that. My only ...

Hi there I really like this. The whole thing has a really lyrical and whimsical feel to it. It is also structred very well and flows perfectly. There are some ...

Hey there When I first read the title I thought this was going to be a pretty average poem. "I like YWS because..." kind of thing. You really surprised me ...

HI there. This is very good. I've never read the poem that is inspired by so I'm just judging this as an original work. For starters, your structure is very ...

HI there Firstly, fantastic flow and structure. It all come together and rolls well. However I feel like some of the lines are a bit tired and overused. For example ...

Hi there. It is an interesting format you used there. The short sentences allow it to flow quite well. However it leaves little room for imagery and character building. I ...

Hi there. This is really good. If you are making a novel of this I'd love to read it. For starters, your characters are perfectly formed and really well fleshed ...

Hi there. I did really like this. I don't think I've ever seen poem (if you could call it a poem) that uses a list and numbering like this. So ...

Hi there Wow this is really fantastic. I can see why this is a featured work. Firstly, the imagery is fantastic. I think imagery and strong pictures can be lacking ...