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Hallo! Aushy here! :} Nice to meet you, and welcome to YWS. Grammar Yeah, I know. But, it must be attended to. He stood up, it was best not to ...

Hay Hero! :} Good job. This poem, however, depressed me. I absolutely HATE Christians who are like that. 99% of Catholics are like that, too, so. Errg. Anyway. I could ...

Hi there. :} Aushy here for a review. Many of the grammatical errors the others pointed out, so I'll just get right down to the real, hardcover, review. Your description ...

Hallo. :} My name is Aushy, and I'm here to review your work today. This was . . . absolutely fantastic! Honestly, I'm not kidding! I love how you portrayed ...

Good job! I really enjoyed this. I just caught one error . . . I'm was it's most vulnerable host. I couldn't leave it and now I am ghost. I'm ...

So, I clicked on this because I recognized the title. Recollections, I thought. Didn't I read something titled like this? So I read the story, and nearly jumped out of ...

Hallo, it's Aushy, here for your review! :} My family and I had just moved to the United States from Ireland, because Mom had gotten a job as a secretary ...

Hallo, Aushy here for your review! :} Chapter 1 “So this must be the door , ” I murmured while looking at one of many doors a two-floor building had ...

Here is Aushy, finally here to review this one! I only found one nitpick. Just one. Kiera sighed and turned the page, ignoring the burning holes in her back that ...

Hallo! It's Aushy, here for your review. :} So, let's visit nitpicks first. I'll do my corrections in red. :} I. Nitpicks Grammar “Don’t give me that look, Gerty!" Mist ...

First off, I want to commend you on how good this is. This is a really fantastic piece of work, and in my opinion, your best yet. Good job! :} ...

Oh, Davidasan, Davidasan, Davidasan. *sigh* Well, I want to congratulate you on mostly good grammar. But, there are some things we need to work on. I mean NEED to work ...

Hallo there. :} Okay, so, this prolouge was short, sweet, and to the point. There's only one problem I had with it, and I could find it very easily because ...

The pounding rain fell over the busy city. Night crawled its way through the streets. The lamps were dim m ed, and a few flickered. It was cold and chilly ...

Hay, it's Aushy, here to review! :} Okay, so, I found this very interesting. It was short and sweet, yet somehow, you seemed to add mystery and wonder in it ...