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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rain-Beaten Flowers

    My turn to receive a review from you! :P Thanks!

    Mar 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Twenty, Part One

    No problem! :D

    Mar 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 4

    Wow. This review's so insightful, I'm starting to suspect you're not human. You also picked up on things I wasn't sure the reader would. Thank you!!! :D

    Mar 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rain-Beaten Flowers

    Thanks! I get what you're saying, about this piece needing more details. This was actually based off a specific character. I remember putting her through such misery, just to make ...

    Mar 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Angeions: Chapter 10

    Thank you!

    Mar 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 1

    Thanks! :D

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 2

    Thanks :D! This was an amazing review. I see what you mean on all points. Expect some edits by tomorrow!

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 1

    Thank you!!! This'll be a huge help in the editing process.

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Remembering my Resurrection - ​Chapter 2 – Beyond death, apparently

    No problem! :D

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Mom

    No problem! You never to fail to amaze with your poetry.

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Decision of Change, Pt. 2

    No problem! :D

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Just another one of them

    I'd suggest Shift Enter, but it works half the time. Most YWSers just fill in the gaps between stanzas with stars, periods, or hyphens, or they add text and white ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: LAPIS :Chapter 11:

    No problem! :D

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Let the World Stay Dark

    No problem! It was a fabulous poem.

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My Heart a Goldfinch

    Oh! Sorry, no, it's perfect. I didn't catch it the first time, so I don't know why I imagined it the second :D. Perfectly clear, just me being foolish. No ...

    Feb 26, 2014


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— John Keats