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Nice work! I quite liked this. The only thing I really have to say about it, however, is that the dialogue seemed a little choppy. Maybe I'm just used to ...

Wow... A very different style. And I must say I do love ancient Greece. I love the way it reads. A little choppy but for a reason, like thought rather ...

Ooh... very poetic. This was a very emotional poem, I can tell. I can feel the sorrow radiating off of it, striking me hard. Your flow is fantastic! Nothing I ...

Oooh.... I really liked this! Just a few things. Ding... Dong, Ding... Dong. Hear all these bells, those sweet silver bells, that all sound the same. We've found someone to ...

Personally, I liked your formatting. It was unique and something new that I haven't really seen before. It did end up breaking the flow a bit, but still worked for ...

Now, it's not a bad poem. I like it. The only thing is, it is rather cliche. It has been done before, but at least you've managed to write it ...

Love ' s for the birds in the trees, but babe I don’t know, if I could stand the image of you without me. A very good start, just missed ...

All I think of, All I dream of, Is the way you captured me, And how I shattered you. I just love that beginning. It's a great start and made ...

As others have said, some grammar errors and some breaks in the flow to watch out for. But it is a sweet poem with a nice concept. Since this is ...

Ooh! I like this. Very dramatic indeed. I loved the beat and how powerful it sounded. A very strong voice you have and boy can you use it! I can't ...

This is a pretty good poem. It flows fairly well with no breaks in the pattern, and the tone is set well. I understand what you are trying to say ...

The format sort of confused my eyes, but that's just me. It's not bad for a first attempt at this type of poem. I'm not really one for love poems, ...

Wow. Your imagery was just spectacular! Very well done. And the way it was worded and the flow of everything was just brilliant. I don't think you could possibly change ...

Very interesting read here. I like the idea and it was well-executed. And I agree with what the person a few posts before me said, the stanzas are much easier ...

Hmm... this had a great concept, but I'm not very sure about the flow. On one hand, it seems almost choppy, but on the other hand, I can see why. ...