Giselle97

Hey its Giselle This is really good, it have a great flow. Sorry if I didn't say much I'm kinda in a hurry ;P. Keep up the good work.

Hey Its Giselle Just wanted to comment on your poem, which by the way is really good. Singing help let a person let out all their emotions. Keep up the ...

Thank for your review. Im not really that good with writing poems but when its about my feelings words just spill out and I have to hurry up and write ...

Thanks for the review I will look at all the mistakes and edit it.

I Love your poem and how you feel when you with that special person.

Thank you for the review and yes it is short but im adding more. ;D

Hey I love all your poems, and love how each one express your feeling in something but it really dont catch a reader attention. But I love it ;D

Hey I just wanted to say this was a really good start but I think you should describe the way your character looks. How do your character feels about going ...

Wow this was really sad. I like the way you put the point of view from a boy (most stories are from a girl point of view but they're still ...

I just came across your story and WOW!.(Lml) I loved it but there were some mistakes in grammer and spelling. But other then that it was a good start. Keep ...

I love your story and your writing. I like how you let your Imagination take over your mind and how you make the character interact with each other. Good work! ...

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT BELIEVE BELLA LEFT EDWARD. SEXY, SMART, AND SO MUCH MORE FOR THAT(JACOB). TEAM EDWARD ALL THE WAY. NICE JOB ;D Giselle97

Lol Domo Like I care. Work on your grammer

Thanks For the review and I promise I will work on my grammer ;D

I loved this story. I think this was a good idea to began with. Its kindy sad how the girl mother died and the last thing she saw. I love ...