GingerLizzy

This is very sweet and I wish someone would say something like this to me one day. I got the impression that, even though it probably wasn't, it was an ...

Not too sure about the structure of your poem but I liked your imagary and description as it was very eery and made me get goosepimples. I liked your first ...

Gosh the [eth] confused me a little, but to be honest, that doesn't take much. I'm not sure how I feel about this poem, all I know is that I ...

Yesterday we lay together, in a field near his house. The sun shone down brightly, bringing out all the shades of green in the grass; each blade shimmering as the ...

Wow, I liked this. It flowed well and also the imagary was pleasing and interesting to read. I particularly like your third line in your first verse, how it refers ...

I liked this. It flowed well and was very deep in emotions. I think some people could relate to this poem, and I think that is what makes a poem ...

I liked the concept, but I felt a bit iffy with the structure. Maybe I can't quote on this, 'cause of my own poor poem structures but for me it ...

Okay I liked how you put across the point that when someone, even a friend, knows a secret about the other, things get awkward, but you are still skipping from ...

I like it and I'm eager to see whether or not you post more of this, but I thinl you should edit your story so that it has an explanation ...

I liked this. It was short and sweet and I thought it flowed really well. I especially liked the line "Seeing a void" and this is maybe for all the ...

Wow you've picked a controversal issue here and I like things like this. I think you put it in a passionate and emotion filled way which was good. I liked ...

Stay here with me Linger in the shadows and watch over me Cling to my essence and hold me tight Stay here with me Bide to my every whim and ...

I like this. I really liked how you described the uprising of the flower, a rose in this case, and then also the downfall when it slowly begins to wilt, ...

Hmm.. You've got a lot of imagary in here and I have to say, I liked it, althought it washed over my sometimes, not giving me enough time to let ...

This poem didn't really capture me in a net of curiosity if I'm honest. Beofre the net could get there I was swooped up by the bird of boredom. It ...