GingerLizzy

I liked the concept.. I think. But to be truly honest your structure was poor and not really well thought out. Punctuation was confusing and for me, it didn't work ...

There is nothing wrong with posting a piece about narcotics on here, in my books anyway. Why not? It is a writing site is it not? I liked this piece, ...

I liked this, is made me laugh and I thought it was a very clever piece. It had good rhyme and rythm to it and flowed well in most places, ...

This was a very sad, emotional piece and I have to say I'm not a fan of this kind of art. But, yes but, it was a a lovely piece ...

This is a good piece, but just like with everyone else, I think that you could be a little more precise with your writing standards. Your poem could and should ...

I liked this, as it flowed well in some place [not all] and the rhyming in some parts was beautiful. What did annoy me though was the repition of that ...

It's a very simple piece and I can't help but like it. I liked your rhyming and the rhytm to the poem, as it flowed well and as soon as ...

As I agree with some others who have reviewed this piece, I think, does it really matter that this piece is heavy on the cliche side? Love poems and sonnets ...

Strange and a little patchy with the rhythm and rhymes in some places. It tended to skip instead of flow and this makes it harder for the reader, a.k.a me, ...

I liked this but maybe you have put your point across about you being worlds apart from the popular kids too straight forward? You could perhaps somehow describe their hair ...

I liked the plot line and some of the imagary and emotional phrases were good but I have to agree with everyone else and say that it needs some work. ...

I cant think of much to say about this to be truly honet - I'm a lot of help! =] But, I liked it. Even though, in it's length, it ...

I liked this, especially the structure of the first verse, which I thought was written beautifully. You're rhyming and flow works well and I like your slight repetition. The imagary ...

I liked this, and your first verse was a capturing few lines that made me want to read the rest. I liked how you built up the agrevation that arises ...

I thought this was a beautiful piece and your imagary was a work of art. I imagined it that way while reading and saw the rose, gently budding. I saw ...