GingerLizzy

Oof... I'm not so sure about this myself. I liked the idea and think that it's pretty original, but what does it really represent? I can't really find any other ...

This was actually a very good poem! I was a bit iffy about the structure of it at first, but it does work so you may as well just ignore ...

This was good, and you had a nice idea! Just a few little things that were niggling at me though. I thought it was just too short for the rhyming ...

Oof, structure, remeber? Rememebr to capitalise your "I's" as this gives your poem a more professional look. I didn't particularly like the repitition that Snoink mentions; I found it to ...

It's not too original this, although the fact that the writer seems to be bored by the whole thing could be something you could work on and elaborate over time. ...

I actually loved this, it was really good and I think I'm going to give it my first ever star. Hmph. [Nodded triumphantly] Okay, the one little niggly thing that ...

Gaze upon the sheep of Earth None of which have names. I think this line could be altered to fit into the structure of the poem. Perhaps re-arraange the words ...

Oof, I found this hard work with the amount of punctuation you added in there. I think you could downscale this so that there aren't so many stops and starts. ...

You have a very mystifying poem here and that's just great! I struggled with the length and your structure though; it seemed to make it jump and skip all over ...

I liked this, the stanzas were short and sweet and that is the best way. You used some good imagery but I think you could add just a little more ...

Oof, I have to say, I found this hard to deal with. It wasn't really a poem, of sorts, and you really only structured it like you were telling someone ...

The repition sent me a little crazy to be honest. I think maybe you could tone it down a little so that you either cut some stanzas, or change the ...

This is wonderful, I really liked how you infused the emotion through the piece. You made the reader feel how you felt about the man in particular, and it could ...

Hm, I liked this, but I don't understand the concept as such. Y'know, that's all I seem to be saying today! I think I have misplaced my brain somewhere. I ...

[Pondered for a good few minutes] Now, I don't think you should take much notice of the review that is coming up, because I believe that I don't really have ...