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Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 1
Hi there, G dropping in for a review :) So, I saw a different part of your story in the Green Room and thought that before I read it, I ...
Aug 28, 2017 -
Re: Ugly Monster
Hello, G here for a quick review :) Firstly, I want you to know that I have reviewed little to no poems, so this may not be that helpful when ...
Aug 28, 2017 -
Re: Sammy, who used to live in my room.
Hello, Gina here for a quick review :) To start, I enjoyed reading this a lot and I think that you are a great writer, but I have a couple ...
Jul 15, 2017 -
Re: Removed
Hi there! Gina here to drop you a quick review :) First of all, Wow! What a plot twist! I can tell you have quite the experience and credibility of ...
Jul 15, 2017 -
Re: it's her fault
Wow. I was shocked to see that this had no reviews by the time I got here, but I now see why; there is nothing to critique! Expect this to ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Cornerstone
Hi Pearl! :) First of all I wanted to let you know that this poem really made me stop for a second and think about all of the corner stones ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: New Orleans Is Mine.
Hi! :) Gina here, stopping in for a review. I know this looks long, but I swear its basically all positive. First of all, as an overview, your title is ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Ayy Lmao Conspiracy - Journal of Prof. Janáček
Hi! :) So I take it that these are supposed to be out of order? If not, it's okay and fixable but if you do plan to put them in ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Anonymous
WOW! :) I was looking through the poetry section after recently publishing one myself (shameless plug) and the title caught my eye. The title, like everything else in the poem, ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Prologue)
Hello :) I know that I'm a little late to be reviewing this, but I saw your most recent chapter in the green room and figured that I would start ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Taking Care of Him
Hello :) it's Gina back for another review. Something that you do very well in your poems, I have come to witness, is that you pull emotion from people with ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl
Hello there :) I would first like to say that this narrative was moving and I could almost perfectly picture in my head each person as soldier girl said goodbye ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: I'd Wish For Us
Hello :) I may be a little late reviewing this, but I thought I would stop by and give you some imput. Firstly, I like this poem a lot. It ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Dresses and Politics: Prologue
Hello :) First of all, I liked the reading this and I think you've set up a good story so I hope you will continue writing from here on out. ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Moonlight: Chapter One
Hi :) I know I may be a little late on reviewing, but I figured that since I just saw that you posted chapter 2 I figured that I would ...
Jul 13, 2017
