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Re: Essay 1
Wow!!! I have to say even though I believe in God, I respect your opinion. You provide some pretty hard facts and example that can make one reconsider. I like ...
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Re: TFoA - Chapter 1
"I live in the year 2218, but it’s not like you would expect with hover cars and robots and holograms. In fact... It’s quite the contrary... In 2018, the power ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 2: War for Libson
Woo! I like the story you have here, reminds me of The Lord of The Rings meets Macbeth, ha. I have a huge fascination for this blade character, he is ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Alone with the Sun --Chapter 1 & 2
Wow, this was for one, lengthy, but it was a great read. It was really descriptive and I love your character, the story seemed so natural and so real, I ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: My character: Nani Long
I love the character outline you have going here. She seems to be the epitome of evil because for one she takes pride in some pretty messed up things. "Likes: ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: The Signs: Prologue
Ok, I love horror and the supernatural, so I was really fond of this. I am not much for grammatical errors but I can give you input on what I ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Cursed world: Chapter two (I)
Geo here! I read your last chapter and now I am up to this. “I’m sad for my brother”, with watery eyes he said. The corner of his eyes was ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Cursed world: Chapter one
WOOO! Ok, so I read your prolong, and now I have read your first chapter. I'm really feeling it, this is my new favorite story. I really like the protagonist, ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Cursed world: Prologue
Wow! I'm new to your stories so I decided to follow it from the beginning. I absolutely love it, so I will follow you. There was one part that confused ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Vampirisi (Vampirial II); 1.1
I'm new to your whole series, but I saw you had a later chapter in the new book sections, so I decided to follow till I got to your first ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: House of Night: Chapter 1: Third Person
Hey there, I really loved your story. I like this mysterious guy thing going on and I feel sorry for the girl whose parents died. I am not much for ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Incredible Hulk Can Be Nice~Chapter 1 (Edited)
Hey Pinkiegirl, you reviewed one of my works before and I wanted to return the favor. I like the story and I'm interested to see how your characters develop and ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: The Road of Stars Ch1
This story is really interesting, I like the concept and everything and the beginning really brain f*cked me, I loved this part "Some people say the end is only the ...
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Description/Chapter 1
I really like what you have going here. Before I continue, I'm not one for grammatical errors but here are a few small ones. "Couple of more days before I’m ...
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Take Me Instead - Chapter 3
Wow, I love it, it's descriptive and I feel for the character. I'm not one for critique, but I saw one error along the way, "Their looks varied from threatening ...
Jul 5, 2014
