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Hi Twit. :) Solly here to review. The apple never falls far from the tree, and I believe (i must believe) That my fruit is infinitely better, and sweeter, than ...

Hi Briggsy! I'm Solly, and I'm here to review your piece. :) First off, I should say that I love this. Your characters' seem real. The main character's name is ...

Hi there, adlofton. I'm Solly and I'm going to review for you today. I think your story is pretty simple. I like it. It seems real and it's pretty entertainment. ...

Hi, Jemo. I'm here, as requested. I'll try to make a descent review for you here. xD “It’s getting cold”, he thought. Instead of quotes, I think this should be ...

Hi there, Doxie. I like your writing. I like the subject you're bringing up, because lots of girls feel like this, even when they're beautiful, just because people and society ...

Hi there, Madame. I'm here to review, as requested. Also sorry it took so long, my life has been kind of in a rush lately. >.< So My apologize. :) ...

Yay! Part 2! Me likes! D'aww... this is such a sweet poem. Please , Baby , Don't Go Anymore .< I also noticed there's age difference between your characters, which ...

Hey, Llamita! The queen of commas is here. *evull laugh* Hehe... xD Anyways, I'm reviewing: Nitpicks: "You got injured, when the World Trade Center collapsed," T t hey would say, ...

Haha... Hi there my friend. Pretty interesting poem. But I wonder who's talking... and to whom? Is it a kid to his daddy? Or a boy to a girl? Hmm... ...

Hi YouWishYouHadThis! I'm here to review as requested. ^_^ Once again, another wonderful poem. Your punctuation is kind of odd, I don't know if others have told you, though I ...

Hi frieeeeeeeend! ^_^ I love this poem so much, I can relate to it. It flows, I dunno, I loved it. Just doing a quick review, I spotted some weird ...

Hi Chelsea. Wow. This is so well written, I kept on reading without getting distracted. I love the Main Character, her personality is so real. Each character has a different ...

Hi Teeny! I'm Sol, and I'm here to review... or something like that. xD Okay, this poem is simple and short, but I like it. :) Though, I think it ...

Hi Drama... I'm here to... review, I guess... lol. This poem is really confusing. I have no idea what you're talking about or who you are talking to. In the ...

Hehe. Hi Drama. ^_^ Here I am, as I promised. I think the writting is great, I can't say there's anything real to review here... just a few commas. The ...