Galatea

more magnetic poetry.... why your fiddle roses like wax loves beat our tiny void with these lazy symphony boys delirious dream men aching with eternity languid lucious goddess or a ...

Aww! Thanks Nate!

This is a really amazing piece. I don't care greatly for the format, I think it makes it difficult to read, but visually it's very pleasing. I would love to ...

A. O. is right, this is absolutly stunning! Great work!

It is so nice to find someone who can connect on that level. Most people read this and go dur.....

What, exactly, in my poem purtains to nature? The title? Its in reference to the jungles of Vietnam. If you notice, I compare the war there with the war currently ...

Thanks Nate! What exactly did you disagree with? I didn't notice any of my theories on how westernization is destroying china in there...it's actually something I'd love to discuss with ...

okay, here's a revision. I'M KEEPING BELLY DAMNIT!!! I LIKE BELLY!!! *breaths deep* But other than that, I tried to change according to your suggestions. Whattcha think? *** on my ...

No. I like belly. Thanks for playing. Hmm a bit with a dog, eh? Mistaken identies, a pirate king, a bit with a dog and love triumphant. Would that help?

You know I love this piece, darling. And since I already commented on it at that Other Place (*shudders in fear*), I won't. Except to say that it's one of ...

Actually, the capitialized letters don't really serve a purpose. Or maybe they did, and my twisted mind simply forgot. They're only there 'cause it makes it look...I dunno...more profound than ...

*bump* forgive me!!

Tongue in cheek. I like it. There are a few places that are weird rythmically, but I'll look to those when I have more time. Ever see the movie But ...

Thanks Grimm, you're too good to me ^.^ I'm sure there are flaws, but it always helps to get outside opinions . . . More more more more more more!! ...

Translation: Zhe ge duo yao bu wo de . . . Ni ai ni de jia ma? Ni zui ai Zhongguo ma? Zhen de. How much want isn't mine . ...