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Re: I'm sorry.
It is full of emotion, it kinda makes me depressed because it reminds me of something...but overall its a very deep and serene-like poem. I loved it. Never change, don't ...
Mon May 23, 2011 4:30 am -
Re: Joy
Good word choice. Shows a lot of emotion. Brings life to the words. Lovely, sweet, poem. Don't stop.
Mon May 23, 2011 4:06 am -
Re: The Prettiest Girl In The World
This is a very sweet poem. It shows charisma. Minor flaws. But overall, great work. Don't stop.
Mon May 23, 2011 4:04 am -
Re: Spring
It is very sweet, it is cool how you can bring out a lot of emotion with little words. Amazing work, dont stop.
Mon May 23, 2011 4:01 am -
Re: My Dreams
This poem is very inspirational for someone whos leaving college or high school or something. It has lots of emotion and good desciptions. Very nice, dont stop.
Mon May 23, 2011 3:58 am -
Re: Take Flight
I dont usually write poems about animals or nature, but you make me look at birds a whole NEW WAY! or if the little birds was symbolic for something, it ...
Mon May 23, 2011 3:56 am -
Re: The Morning Cha Cha
i just...i just... i dont know... i ran out of things to sorry...
Mon May 23, 2011 3:51 am -
Re: Their Apocalypse
Deep man deep i dont know if i could ever write something as complex and deep as this Why did you write this story? Just wondering
Sat May 21, 2011 8:42 pm -
Re: Elf
i think if i laughed you would be offended so i will just say this is a great piece of writing you make me look at elfs a whole new ...
Sat May 21, 2011 6:55 pm -
Re: Mean Girls
Even though i dont understand it i love it
Sat May 21, 2011 6:48 pm -
Re: Tormented Thoughts in n Insane Girl's Brain
theres nothing wrong with this poem thingy! i think you perfectly captured the essence of a 13 year old girl dont stop
Sat May 21, 2011 6:47 pm -
Re: Jelly Beans
I love how you made a cute poem by just reading the flavors of jelly beans It shows that poems don't always have to be dramatic this is a lovely ...
Sat May 21, 2011 6:41 pm -
Re: Invisible tears
I love short poems this is a good one it shows so much with so little keep it up
Sat May 21, 2011 6:34 pm -
Re: love?
It's a great poem, i just was wondering what made you write this? Are you mad at love? glad? If you could go deeper down and bring up the real ...
Sat May 21, 2011 6:22 pm -
Re: invisible
I like it I like it alot
Sat May 21, 2011 6:17 pm
