Gadi.

Mmmmm.... I liked the ending of the seventh one, but I HATED the epilogue! So terrible! Ew! Disgusting! FAVORITE BOOKS IN THE WORLD. This ending was really what I imagined ...

Mmmmm.... It's okay. You worked a pretty bland conecpt into a fairly entertaining, sad, intriguing piece, and your simple word choice make the poem that much more concise. So good ...

Mmmm... I liked this...very original and amusing. The last stanza was really from a different poem though. Why don't you continue writing about the evil critiques? And if you must ...

I liiked this. The only major problem with this poem is the structure. Is this a letter/poem? Is it for Chandra or is it by Chandra? What do you mean ...

Good. I really liked your use of structure and rhyme. It really entertained me into reading it. So good job on that. My favorite stanza was the first one I ...

Nice. I liked all the imagery, it was beautiful--the flies similie was genius! How did you think of that? "You are my hangover from last night and the night before, ...

Weird poem. I have to say I liked it, because it really is a song that lulls you to sleep, and relaxes you. It should be a song, not a ...

Interesting. Two lines of poetry--it's a bit bizarre--and I like bizarre things! However, this is not easy to complete an entire critique on. I can only find one thing that ...

AMAZING! So satiric, in an unpolitical and subtle way. :) Loved it. SUGGESTION: Make us understand more from the first two stanzas. They were really confusing, so the end didn't ...

I was really disappointed by this book. It did not have any of the intrigue, beauty, and emotion of his previous one. A Thousand Splendid Suns was bland, borning, and ...

Nice. I could sorta get a hip-hop rhythm throughout all the piece. but what I usually don't like about your rap songs are all the allusions--King Kong (yeah, it's funny, ...

I like this. It has its weaknesses, but I really felt entertained and interested with this poem. I LOVED the concept. The sixth sense...wow. It feels as if I could ...

WOW! This was incredible. I loved this. Beautiful imagery, beautiful concept. Must be one of the best poems I've read on here. I especially liked your lack of punctuation. It ...

Nice. This is really good. You used very ice vocabulary, very nice structure. I especially liked the last stanza that talks about "closed off by old instincts, fear"... My only ...

In the first sentence, I would personally change the word moonlight to moon. "his dirt covered face" dirt-covered is better---you need to add another word though! "In his arms, the ...