Gadi.

I've only read "My Sister's Keeper", which was excellently well-written and well-thought-out and with excellent plot and characters. However, i started a few books after that, and I found out ...

Amazing. Okay, so I won't praise you too much, but let me tell you, this was one of the best pieces in the whole site. Now-- I hate the italics ...

The first paragraph is completely not your style, Snoink. I like your style better; this was really rather random, especially the first sentence (which is complete telling, by the way), ...

Wow. I loved it. Most of the song was rather--well--obscure and not so understandable, but I still really liked it. I didn't really get that it was a bat teaching ...

WELCOME! This is interesting, but it really is too short to write an entire critique about. Still, I'll mention one thing-- "comes to land to rest " The repetition of ...

Mmmmm. Terrible, terrible. This is what people call "emo" poetry. It's nonesense really. It's just words that rhyme--and I bet you right now millions of people all over the world ...

Well, Via--I really don't like this. The only good thing about it, really, is that it is well-written--to a certain degree. "Her silent voice travels on the wind." This is ...

Awesome! I loved it! It was funny--but I liked your other one better. Still, this was the second best script I read on here! Except you had too much stage ...

I actually like the version 1 better. It seemed more full, more flowing--but of course, version 1 isn't flawless either. I sort of combined the two here, to make sure ...

Nice! I really liked this one. It was full of life and really felt...well, artistic in a way. The only thing about this is that I really think you should ...

Okay--I am not sure if pantoums are allowed to change lines when repeating them, like "I did this" when the next stanza it's "and I did this". I hate Pantoums. ...

Mhmmmm.... This is a confusing, cliched simmer of sayings and comparisons and anecdotes in a poem that do not make sense at all. I don't think this poem's got it. ...

Wow. I liked this. It really gave off the feeling of sadness and sort of like disappointment--though it didn't really do such a good job of describing Manhattan, but that's ...

Ugh. What could I say? If this was a song in a musical, I wouldn't even bother to watch it. It's the epitome of cliche. If you could employ this ...

HAHA! Amazing. I read it twice--the first time it was funny and confusing--though not as deep as I now see it. It's much more intriguing, and, well, beautiful, now that ...