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Re: Kevin and Shoko - Chapter 5
I mean, mostly. But yeah, I could've described it a little more.
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Kevin and Shoko - Chapter 5
There's not a whole lot of description because I described the scenery in the last few chapters. Thanks Atty!
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Blue Pill - An Interactive Interview
That works, but I think I'll replace the thing in the beginning with a semi-colon, as that works out a little better for me. But I'm glad you noticed that! ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Blue Pill - An Interactive Interview
The hand on the forehead is sort of a "face palm," but he continues to talk with it rather than have it on his face. It's a sign showing that ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: A Haiku and Tanka
Ah, that makes sense. Oops ;n;
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Ignored
Thank you!
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: No Worries
Thank you! And yes, the capitalization thing is a bit of a personal style. I appreciate the review.
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: No Worries
Eh, I prefer writing short poems like this even though they may seem a bit /too/ short. Thanks for the review! And "like" and "light" don't really rhyme, it may ...
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: Ignored
No capitalization is a personal style, and the use of no commas is also a personal style. But I appreciate the review. The title is called "Ignored" because my friends ...
Oct 20, 2015 -
Re: Ignored
Thank you! And that is a good note, I should've changed things up in the second stanza. Review appreciated.
Oct 20, 2015 -
Re: Ignored
Thanks, Winter!
Oct 20, 2015 -
Re: Ignored
I kind of tried to make it so that at the first line, the reader felt pity for the speaker, then felt pity for the friends. But I get this. ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: Ignored
Thanks for the review! I'll fix that, makes sense.
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: Grenade
Thanks for the review. Even though my reply is short I promise I read the whole thing xD
Oct 17, 2015 -
Re: A Question Left Unanswered
Thank you for the critiquing! I do get a bit bummed out when it's mostly praise, I am, of course, looking to improve. You read my mind.
Oct 16, 2015
