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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Kevin and Shoko - Chapter 5

    I mean, mostly. But yeah, I could've described it a little more.

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Kevin and Shoko - Chapter 5

    There's not a whole lot of description because I described the scenery in the last few chapters. Thanks Atty!

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Other » Politics, Realistic Re: Blue Pill - An Interactive Interview

    That works, but I think I'll replace the thing in the beginning with a semi-colon, as that works out a little better for me. But I'm glad you noticed that! ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Other » Politics, Realistic Re: Blue Pill - An Interactive Interview

    The hand on the forehead is sort of a "face palm," but he continues to talk with it rather than have it on his face. It's a sign showing that ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: A Haiku and Tanka

    Ah, that makes sense. Oops ;n;

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ignored

    Thank you!

    Oct 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: No Worries

    Thank you! And yes, the capitalization thing is a bit of a personal style. I appreciate the review.

    Oct 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: No Worries

    Eh, I prefer writing short poems like this even though they may seem a bit /too/ short. Thanks for the review! And "like" and "light" don't really rhyme, it may ...

    Oct 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ignored

    No capitalization is a personal style, and the use of no commas is also a personal style. But I appreciate the review. The title is called "Ignored" because my friends ...

    Oct 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ignored

    Thank you! And that is a good note, I should've changed things up in the second stanza. Review appreciated.

    Oct 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ignored

    Thanks, Winter!

    Oct 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ignored

    I kind of tried to make it so that at the first line, the reader felt pity for the speaker, then felt pity for the friends. But I get this. ...

    Oct 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ignored

    Thanks for the review! I'll fix that, makes sense.

    Oct 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Grenade

    Thanks for the review. Even though my reply is short I promise I read the whole thing xD

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Question Left Unanswered

    Thank you for the critiquing! I do get a bit bummed out when it's mostly praise, I am, of course, looking to improve. You read my mind.

    Oct 16, 2015


You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things...
— Gone With the Wind