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Blue Pill - An Interactive Interview

by GLaDOS


This is a little interactive thing for you guys to partake in, it does qualify as a work because I do want some reviews on it to determine if this was fun, the writing was well-done, and if I should do this again.

All you have to do is choose A, B, or C to determine your answer to the interview question. (IMPORTANT): Type each letter you choose in the comments and I will determine the outcome for you by replying to your comment. Remember to think of your answer from the perspective of you as a politician! Have fun.

The nation is in your hands, you are to either pass the law of the Blue Pill or ignore it.

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You are in what appears to be an office, but have been called for an interview. A tall and slender man is sitting in front of you behind the desk. A document is placed before you as the man cocks an eyebrow, motioning his head towards it. The document reads:

It has been scientifically proven that the human race can only access 10% of their brain capacity. Dolphins are known to access 20%, technically, they are smarter than us humans. The government has been working on a pill to increase the amount humans are able to access to about 20% (just like the dolphins).

CpH4, otherwise known as the “Blue Pill” is this substance that can do such works of magic. It is of an electric blue and powder-like solidity that reacts as soon as it is placed in the body. It jerks the body around such as a seizure and throws it onto the ground in panic.

Tests have been run, and the pill hasn’t produced any lethal effects as far as scientists know, but there is no way of being sure. Scientists are still running tests as of know and will continue to run tests until proven that the “Blue Pill” is at least close to 100% safe.

It has been predicted that once the pill is taken, it gradually increases the percentage of brain capacity accessible. The government has been discussing whether to release the product to the public or not, and few criminals in the world have already begun vending the product amongst various alleyways and places that aren’t seen (sharp-witted people, they are).

Although nothing is certain yet, it all lies in the hands of the federal level. Shall the “Blue Pill” be released to the public? Is it safe enough to purchase?

You look up at the man, and he snatches the document away, sliding it into a blue folder. You are aware of this case. You gulp at the fact that the public now knows about it.

“Looks like you’ve got yourself in a pickle here,” The man remarks with a scowl, “This document was released to the public and you did nothing to stop it.”

You let out a loud sigh and stare down at your feet in shame. You feel like a child, an idiot who isn’t paying attention in class, except this quandary is a bit more important than simply paying attention in class.

“I didn’t know.” You simply say with a shrug, seeing that it’s a simple little article, that not many people will see it.

“Edward P. Stein.” The man reads aloud, “That’s the author. Do something about this or I will see to it that you are demoted.” He says with a hand on his large forehead.

“But for right now… let’s proceed with this discussion about the pill. I have a few questions for you since you’re in tribulation at the moment,” he begins, “I’m also here to aid you in what we’re going to do about passing this law.”

“What was your name again?” You ask with an eyebrow raised slightly.

“George Feldman.” He responds with a sigh.

Question 1:

“What do you think of CpH4?”

A: “I think it’s dangerous, such a thing needs to go through some more testing, but even after that it’s a bit risky.”

B: “It’s quite interesting, I believe it would be beneficial to the human race to increase our intelligence. Imagine the possibilities!”

C: “We’d lose control of the country if such a thing were to be released. If people become smarter, what do they need us for?”

Question 2:

“If such a thing were to be released, what kind of impact would it have on society?”

A: “It’d be a train wreck. People might get sick and die or catch a horrendous disease. Not to mention the seizures, you can bite off your tongue from those, and we don’t want people who already have seizures to experience more. If the pill already starts out with a seizure, there’s a chance it might include some more within the whole process of accessibility being raised.”

B: “People could invent new things, such as better computers and even more advanced technology than we have as of now. Sure it may be risky, but tons of other pills have been put in stores and they’ve turned out just fine (with a few side effects).”

C: “It’ll have a huge impact, the pill could be sold in regular corner stores but have the ability to increase intelligence. People become smarter, and the product will make us money. We would want to run a few more tests first to make sure the product is safe enough to be ready for purchase.”

Question 3:

“What would the common man do with all this intelligence?”

A: “The common man would use it to rob a bank and throw dollar bills at strippers. How about we talk about the common woman instead?”

B: “An intelligent person would use it to upgrade the latest technology. New computers, new video games, better graphics and sound. Technology is the key to a growing world, that’s how we got started in the first place!”

C: “To upgrade our education system. A person of that much intelligence would come up with a way to spread it to others so we all make a difference. It may sound cheesy, but that’s the way this nation will grow into something better.”

Question 4:

“Since the person would unlock so much hidden intelligence, do you think they’d lose a bit of their personality as well?”

A: “No way. A person can’t lose their personality, the word even has “person” in it! Our personalities are what make us who we are, no evolution of capacity can change that.”

B: “It’s definitely possible, if there’s so much knowledge in our brain and less personality then we may lose ourselves. There’s so much to know, but there are people than knowledge.”

C: “That could happen; however, people have so much knowledge, yet people are such characters inside. Wouldn’t the two balance out and have as much knowledge as personality?”

Question 5:

“If the full brain is exposed to everyone, would things like music, culture, and religion disappear? Why would people still need it if all they need is knowledge?”

A: “That’s a tough one. Music is what has been passed through many centuries throughout history, I don’t think it can be gotten rid of so easily even with the fact that all people may need is knowledge. These sorts of things keep people occupied. What would they do all day, study? They’d have no life other than pure knowledge.”

B: “That’s depressing to think about, but it could happen. All people may need is knowledge; therefore, forgetting what makes them people rather than robots with the appearance of what used to be human. That’s a little scary that we might lose who we are…”

C: “Of course not, we’ve been making music for centuries and centuries. I actually believe music would get a lot better. It’d have more beautiful and clear messages rather than some of the horrible things we listen to today.”

Concluding question:

“Should the Blue Pill be sold to the public? Why or why not (concluding statement)?”

This final question is for YOU to answer below!

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Reviews are appreciated! I’d like some reviews on my writing and grammar, and the storyline as well. Thank you!

And remember to write your letters in the comments below and if I should more of these. Your letters determine your ending, which will be displayed for you as a reply to your comment (or in PM if you prefer).


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Sun Oct 25, 2015 4:48 pm
erilea wrote a review...



Hello, GlaDOS! I'm Artemis28, and I'm here to review your interview. Teehee. Happy Review Day to you! :D

Okay, I want to begin with some nitpicks! There's a little grammatical thing in the beginning. There shouldn't be a comma before technically, unless you put a "so" before it. If you don't want to add in that, then make a new sentence after the "20%" part. Don't forget to capitalize "Technically" if you do.

"Dolphins are known to access 20%, technically, they are smarter than us humans."

In question two, choice B, there is a giant space between two lines. What's up with that? I recommend you change that, if it wasn't intentional (and I think it wasn't).

Okay, these are my answers to the given questions:

1. A
2. C
3. C
4. C
5. A

And for the final question... yes, I think the Blue Pill should be sold, but only in SOME stores. Not everywhere across the world, but it'll be available if someone was desperate and wanted it to make them smarter.

Overall, I think the idea was really interesting and well thought out! Very original, too; I don't think I've ever seen this before on Young Writers Society. Well, good job and keep writing, GlaDOS!

-Artemis28




GLaDOS says...


That works, but I think I'll replace the thing in the beginning with a semi-colon, as that works out a little better for me. But I'm glad you noticed that! And I didn't want to put a "so" before it because it sounds a little childish.

Whoah! I don't know what happened in question two! Thank you for pointing that out as well! xD

Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you found it interesting!



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Sun Oct 25, 2015 10:56 am
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Separately, My review.

I had lots of fun stepping in to my politician shoes. (I am interested to know based on my results whether you will be voting for me in the upcoming election?) As you have asked for a review I shall oblige (especially if it helps my vote)

I like how you use italics to differentiate between text. The debrief is really good at giving a summery of what the pill is in a concise manner, as a busy politician I find concise reports good.

‘You look up at the man, and he snatches the document away, sliding it into a blue folder. You are aware of this case. You gulp at the fact that the public now knows about it.’ This sentence lead me to believe that “the man” made it public. Evidently it was already public before the man put it in the folder. Perhaps “You are aware of this case, it is the folder of accidentally publicised documents. Gulp”

‘“I didn’t know.” You simply say with a shrug, seeing that it’s a simple little article (and hoping) that not many people will see it.’ Insert hoping?

‘“Edward P. Stein.” The man reads aloud, “That’s the author. Do something about this or I will see to it that you are demoted.” He says with a hand on his large forehead.’ Why has he a hand on his forehead? Part of me thinks a salute but a man with the power to dismiss me wouldn’t salute.

Asking the questions you have forces the reader to consider the implications of such a pill. It is nice to be made to think. Much of my day is sighing papers.

My only problem with the questions is number 5 because it jumps to the conclusion that with knowledge people don’t need the arts.

A great piece of writing which I did enjoy, I look forward to seeing my results.




GLaDOS says...


The hand on the forehead is sort of a "face palm," but he continues to talk with it rather than have it on his face. It's a sign showing that he is stressed with this meeting.

And thank you for the review! I did work hard on this to make it into something a little different than what you normally see. I'll type up your results shortly after Review day has concluded. Again, thank you!



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Sun Oct 25, 2015 10:29 am
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Q1 A + 1/2B Please have the entire scientific report on my desk by this afternoon. I like to think of chemistry as a hobby of mine.
Q2 C
Q3 C … I hope, Are you from the media, Id like to know if this interview is part of the public campaign or not +1/2A
Q4C
Q5A
In answer to the concluding question I shall have to have a meeting with my other party members to determine our stance on this issue. However at this point it seems like the blue pill could be of great benefit to humanity but I would like to see the studies have a full evaluation and for the long and short term effects to be clearly known. I see it as the government’s responsibility to ensure the correct measures are put in place to ensure legal and fair use of the blue pill CpH4. Yet I envisage that if it is proved to be, as the current research suggests, then it may be distributed as vaccines are under our new budget in the following year in the public heath scheme.





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