GLaDOS

Of course! I'm glad you commented on the review, usually writers would ignore it and continue along without taking reviewers' advice. You've got great work here, just fix it up ...

PERSONAL PROBLEMS MAKE ME DIFFERENT MERF

Oh alright! ^-^ Sorry then.

One of the messages of the story is that she has to be this age for the message to come across, if it was a younger child, then the imagination ...

It was kneeling down, watching her draw. Sorry for the misunderstanding.

Thank you for your tips! And I understand that it flows quickly, but that mostly happens because I get so into writing this story, that I start to type really ...

Don't be afraid to be as harsh as you need to be! Every writer should learn to take criticism because it's good for them! Thanks.

Thank you! I was kind of feeling the same about being too repetitive, but I wanted to get some reviews first. I understand all of these nitpicks completely, don't be ...

Thank you!

Thanks!

No, no you may not.

Alrighty! I'll PM you every time a new chapter comes out. Thanks for reading. c:

These guys are real people. Which, is why this is listed under fanfic. Also, I don't think certain names should be for certain genders. That's just my opinion.

Everyone keeps telling me to add a new paragraph when people speak, but this is my own personal style to keep it all into one paragraph. I did the same ...

Yaaay! c: