Funkymomo

I love snow poems! You do a god job describing everything in a new way, and I don't see any other mistakes. Every line you wrote is new and creative, ...

I think posum had a little glitch, he did that on other things two. . . Anyways, the poem. I both like and dislike the poem. For my likes, I ...

Bold letters = edits Purple = comments As i stare into my mirror, studing myself, I notice dark bags under my bright green eyes. Bags caused from lack of sleep. ...

For everything there must be a last. A last minute, a last hour,a last day,month or year. A last drink, a last coke, a last tequila, scotch or beer. A ...

Wrote this for school. I thought I'd share. ____________________________________ Like a pen in timid hands Held on edge, squeezing tight- Ink clouds eyes, vision banned Quench for the dying light. ...

I'm not a huge fan of poetry, but I found myself reading this mindlessly. The words flowed really well. I liked the second and third stanzas best. You did a ...

Once upon a time I could count on you You could hold my hand And my dreams would come true You kisses would take me Your hugs wouldn’t shake me ...

I think I know, And I think they're right. I think my soul has taken flight. I think I love him , I'ts been a year, I'm wondering why I'm ...

I don't have much time, but I'll give you a short review. It was exciting, and I kept reading it once I started. You did a good job describing things, ...

STUPID I am Stupid To believe That they saw something in me Stupid To try To believe their lies Stupid To think That I could be somebody Stupid to feel ...

Hi, I'm not to good at grammar but i'll tell you other things. The end was kind of typical, turn around and the guy's gone, you might want to change ...

“Your Highness, please wake up, the king and queen has request your presence in the library.” Bethany said, shaking Ehlena’s Interesting way of spelling Elena. I like the name Alayna ...

Wow, that was great! I loved how you write about liking the quietness of sunset and storms, when everyone else likes the busy beaches in the middle of the day. ...

Hi That was great, really emotional. I think the first paragraph was the worst, It had to much bland description of being hurt and I feel like that's already been ...

I think the colored text pulls away from the story and I agree with idraax, the colors can be hard to read. I noticed a lot of details in it ...