Fullmetal13

Thank youforthe review. This review is a perfect example of how to not be a jerk. You reviewed content as well as grammar and I appreciate it

Holy Christ thanks for this brilliant review abound comma placements on a rough draft with no insight to the content of the piece whatsoever. Super helpful. (Sarcasm) for future reference, ...

I knew that this part was going to be one of the more "boring" parts. My last few have thrown a lot of drama and content at the readers. I ...

untitled 06 is up :)

Reviews that are constructive are cool. However, this wasn't a review. She was being that critic from Ratatouille. You're not a "nice user" if you just dump all over someone's ...

The shift enter thing helped. But this is clearly just some sappy poetry from two perspectives about a breakup, each former partner wishing the other the best. There's no mystique ...

You didn't. I usually just skip over reviews that I don't like or don't agree with, but in this case, you really just shit all over the entirety of this ...

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I really enjoyed your review. It wasn't super nitpicky and I actually got something useful about it. I definitely could've made the break up a lot longer however, I do ...

The fanfiction was meant for people who had watched rise of the guardians so that you already know the plot of what happened in that story and character development really ...

You have to watch the movie to understand. It wasn't meant for people who haven't.

this was a freestyle i did a while back and none of it felt forced at the time and just thought i'd say it's a rap not a poem.

by the way, Abi is my cousin.

ok this is going to be more of an oppinonated thingy than a real review. From a readers point of view you're going 'what the fork is going on.' I'm ...

lol its partially a rap