FourLeafClover

Hey there! I'm here to review your work! Okay, so, first order of business: You did really well on it! Here's how: 1. Your topic was a really important topic ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your poem! So, first of all, this is a really good poem! I like the way you labeled things certain ways, such as "The ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your poem! First of all, I would like to say that you did really well on it! You painted an image in my mind ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! Before I get started, I agree that witches are totally misunderstood. Also, if you want to read a series with good witches, I ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your poem! First of all, this is a really good poem. It flows together very well, which is always a good thing. I also ...

Hi! I'm here to write a review on your poem! So, first things first, I hope you feel better (not part of the review, but I really hope you do). ...

Hi! Here to review your poem! Okay, so, the rhyming is really good. I like how you kept finding different words to rhyme with "moonlight," and how you reused "rays" ...

Hey! I'm here to review your story! Okay, so, I would first like to point out that this is really good. You got the feelings across, and it really helps ...

Hi! I'm here to review your work! Okay, so, the first thing I noticed was that you need to work on your punctuation. For example, there are a bunch of ...

Hey! So, I think that this is mostly really well written, and the story seems pretty interesting. You've also written a lot, so I can tell that you have a ...

Hi! So, this is a pretty interesting poem. It definitely shows how some people feel about facade, and I also think your metaphors help with that. I do think, though, ...

This is really good! I like how you used a bunch of not-so-awesome emotions at first, but then toward the end you changed them to pleasant emotions. It shows some ...