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Hello(: I enjoyed reading your poem, but I really want to address some small problems. Okay? When I think back to that horrible day comma, September.11,2001 This should look like ...

Hello, I'm Forti. I've been on YWS for almost a year, but I've never heard of you. I just want to introduce myself(: I love your poem. It's quite lovely, ...

Hey there, I'm Forti(: Lemme say, I've reviewed many poems on YWS and your's is very good compared to the others. Just a few small nitpicks and then a helpful ...

Hey Dessie(: I'm back. I can't remember if I reviewed your first chapter, but I know I reviewed the second...Or maybe it was the other way around **thinks. . . ...

Destiny, how's it going? Long time no chat! Anyways, I love this novel, gurl(: Brilliance. The first chapter was awesome and you had great people do great reviews, but I ...

Hello I'm Fortissimo(: I'm not familiar with your writing, but I hope to be so soon! I love poetry, but could never post any of my own poems. Kudos to ...

First off I want to say hello, I don't think I've ever introduced myself, I'm Fortissimo, Ff or Forti for short. Your poem rocks. I'm a poetry writer, but not ...

Ok. So like Brom said, the beginning was like a sappy, pointless teen drama. Too predictable, you know what I mean? The characters weren't developed well and it was sort ...

I really like this poem, first of all. I want to say that it is important to even out your punctuation. At the end of some lines, you use a ...

First of all, I don't believe that we've formally met, I'm Fortissimo(: I want to start off by saying that you are a really good poet. Your words shine with ...

Hey, I really liked this poem, I guess I will start off with that(: There was a truce in your hands, nails blue, soothing my inflamed skull comma, while snow ...

I don't know if my review will even compare to Anime's review, but I can offer more helpful hints and more points for the Bamboozlers(: One thing that I would ...

This was overall well written. You need a quick lesson on punctuation, though. It's important that you have punctuation! I suggest: You mess with their head comma, Make them think ...

First of all, it's pretty awkward that you have a stalker. Wait do you really? Great poem either way. Everything looked great, punctuation, grammar, etc. I could really step inside ...

I really like this poem, short sweet and to the point! The spelling, grammar, and punctuation is good. Scratch that, really good. I could really feel what was running through ...