ForsakenAngel

Hello there, how is your day? Much like Ossum, I had to reread this several times before I started to really comprehend it. It wasn't because the words didn't make ...

Hello there, how has your day been? Well, this isn't nearly as good as your work Your title goes here... but it definitely has potential to be amazing! You've put ...

Hello, I hope your day is going good! Let me start by saying that I absolutely love this. Its well written and holds just enough mystery that I can't wait ...

Hello there, I hope your day is going good! Let me start by saying that I have not read any of the previous parts, but I still think this is ...

Hello there! I hope your day is going well. Overall, I really like this. The point you're trying to make is clear, though at times it got repetitive. You're wording, ...

Hello there, hope your day is going well! First of all I just want to tell you that I am in love with this! I haven't read any of the ...

Hello there, I hope your day has been well! So, I'm just going to start off by saying that no, I haven't read any of the previous parts of this, ...

Hi there, how is your day going? Alright, so first off let me say that I really like this, and I can't wait to read more. Admittedly I was a ...

Hey Tigga!! Ok so I accidentally clicked on this, but I'll review it anyway! First off, I agree with Biscuits, you should definitely bracket the title. Also, this has got ...

Hello there! Let me start by saying that this is rather good! I'm looking forward to reading more. The only thing that really slowed me down was the fact that ...

Hello there! Might I just say, this is very long. Is this a report for school or something, because if it is, I have a feeling you'll get a pretty ...

Why hello there! First of all I would like to say that I love how detailed this is compared to other poetry I've read. You created a story that I ...

Hello there! I would like to start off by saying that this is amazing. It was well written and the imagery was great. It pulled me in from the beginning ...

Hello there! First off, this is pretty good! The only thing I didn't like was how the "I" wasn't capitalized at the beginning and then was at the end. All ...

Hey there! Alright, this is very inspirational! You always hear people say "Forgive and forget" but the short version is never as good as hearing the long version. When you ...