Formslipper

I read it. Beginning to end, it was beautiful. I felt as if it spoke to me; it was almost as if it expressed my feelings for me. Very laid ...

I read it, and I thought it was sentimental in a bland sort of way. But, the blandness was very good- it accentuated your theme. Keep it up!

I read it. Very convincing poetry! What I mean by ^that^ is that your rhyming wasn't forced. I struggle a bit with forced rhyming, and always have known it; I ...

I read it, and thought you had a cool message. As poems go, there's generally not much to say, except Keep Writing!

I read it, and think you have a cool way of expressing emotion. No criticism except punctuation and capitalization.

I read it, and really liked it! Each stanza sets up the next.

I read it. It only serves as an attention grabber- good message, though.

"Clean up crew" That really got me laughing! I thought that it was clever, and might even have a message at the end. Who knows? Anyway, good job, and nice ...

I read it. Although I don't know much about poetry, I could still tell that everything flowed well and had intrinsic meaning. Keep it up! Oh yeah, and that was ...

Thank you for the input! It's greatly appreciated. I admit that I'm ad libbing a bit with this story. In other words, I'm not using any form of outline (which ...

I read it, and loved it. Great job, and keep going!

I think you just took my innocence. jk Anyway: awesome, horrible story. I lovingly hated every word of it. :(

I read it. And haha, is this a comedy act? Anyway, I'm home-schooled, so I wouldn't know if the schools are bad. Mine certainly isn't!

You're pretty great! This is a cool poem, and really connected to me. All the neatest people in the world are bottled up inside- introverted, sad, creative. You are someone ...

Too true. I've always thought this and never really had to realize it. Reality is a tormentingly amazing thing. For this, you get followed. BTW, I reported your review to ...